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Tartarus is silent, and the world above is suffering. Finally, a ruler faces her last, and largest regret, before she faces what is consuming her eternity, and somehow, this manages to bring her peace.

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Comment posted by Yutah123 deleted Dec 10th, 2017

Wow, this made me feel somewhat sad, even though I don't particularly like darkish stories (at least, when I'm not looking for them), especially when characters die (the Mane 6 in particular) .:fluttershysad:

By the way, nice touch on the ending; I liked how you kind of... combined, for lack of a better word, "The End" as in the end of a story — which fits in quite nicely with what Tirek said, so even better — and "The End" as in the answer to Celestia's question; very nice. :twilightsmile:

P.S. I feel this picture of the wasteland from "The Cutie Re-Mark" fits perfectly with my image of what Equestria looks like in this story.
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P.S.S Accidentally double posted so deleted my first comment.

I added this story to the Underappreciated Story Society and Buried Treasures.

Could use some polish.

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