9475401 My computer is down and I had to write this chapter from my phone. I was trying to go through the spelling as I went but when you talk into your phone sometimes it registers words differently than what you say so I apologize about that
9475438 the certain fic in question is don't get cocky if you could not tell
and yeah I love this fic cause it's the second closest the mods are going to let us get to that fic cause they removed it and its semi-sequel made by a different dude cause the original creator nosforus is dead (literally, RIP)
I love the story so far just wish it had more chapters if you looking for an editor I will be happy to be one I don't know how to get to private messages on this site so just let me know.
However I could feel my control to start the slip when I saw two people I would have never expect to see there, Ditzy Doo a.k.a. Derpy and her daughter Dinky Doo . However my anger spiked even higher when I saw Dinky trip and then one of the dogs start yelling at her, she was about to be whipped however Ditzy shielded her daughter with her body as she was whipped. At that moment I decided I was going to help them all, my decision was reinforced when I saw the Mane 6 and Spike come out of one of the openings in chains and none of them look unscathed. I was so beyond pissed there were no words to describe what I was feeling and I was going to kill all of the slavers that did not submit to me. And with that I jumped off the cliff.
After jumping off the cliff I decided that the best place to land was in the middle of everything. I hit the ground hard enough to kick up quite a bit of dust and pieces of rock and stone, when everything settled I noticed everyone's gaze was on me which is exactly what I wanted. I quickly scanned the Quarry to get an estimate on how many slavers were in front of me, however my gaze stopped on a diamond dog sitting on a throne, wearing tattered brown pants that rested against his gray coat, and going by his muscles he looked like a bodybuilder on steroids. I figured she was probably the alpha of this group of slavers, I made a mental note to try and get information out of him and see if there was anyone else involved that wasn't currently present.
Hey man big fan I recently made my own account before that I was just reading the count and stuff I wanted to say good job and I've been watching and reading stuff like this for well since my depression has been set aside thank you
9487087 I'm very happy that my story is helping you and I hope my writing will continue to help you. I want you to know that no matter what never feel like you're alone everyone you know is there for you and I'm sure people on this site including myself are here for you as well
9487117 So gonna point some things out to you real quick your story showed up as over 100k words which normally means it is a long story with many chapters however due to how much you typed to describe powers and crap instead of putting a list of powers and then put the descriptions in another chapter or at least the links to where the abilities are explained.
9556050 Good to see you going the “Don’t Get Cocky” route on how to do the story heck I plan to do something similar but not use the merchant or discord or Celestia or Luna but someone and something unexpected to give my character his powers.
Before I could react, she teleported herself, Celestia, Cadence, the Mane Six, Spike, Shining Armor and myself to what I could only assume was the dining room in Canterlot castle.
....Was this posted in haste? it seems like it wasn't run though a spell check?
Either way good chapter!
9475401
My computer is down and I had to write this chapter from my phone. I was trying to go through the spelling as I went but when you talk into your phone sometimes it registers words differently than what you say so I apologize about that
9475409
you want me to copy it out to Google Doc and Spell check it for a repost?
*sees similarities to a certain fic*
*gasp*
*sees the similarities are minimal but still are somewhat noticeable*
*pinkie level gasp*
*insta like insta follow insta fave*
9475438
the certain fic in question is don't get cocky if you could not tell
and yeah I love this fic cause it's the second closest the mods are going to let us get to that fic cause they removed it and its semi-sequel made by a different dude cause the original creator nosforus is dead (literally, RIP)
9475436
That would be very much appreciated actually yes
9475444
If you like this fick because it's similar to that you will love https://www.fimfiction.net/story/401825/dont-you-dare
Does that mean it's unique? I haven't really read many displaced stories.
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There are a few that I've read that start characters off very OP but not all of them start out like that no.
Love reading it so far More chapters please
I love the story so far just wish it had more chapters if you looking for an editor I will be happy to be one I don't know how to get to private messages on this site so just let me know.
Need more chapter I'm eager for more there was big build up now it's at the meet and greet
Suicide is badass
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Huh?
Lmao i love stories like this (op character with powers of gods) and i look forward to the next chapter!
Hey man big fan I recently made my own account before that I was just reading the count and stuff I wanted to say good job and I've been watching and reading stuff like this for well since my depression has been set aside thank you
9487087
I'm very happy that my story is helping you and I hope my writing will continue to help you. I want you to know that no matter what never feel like you're alone everyone you know is there for you and I'm sure people on this site including myself are here for you as well
any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?
Dis good make more chapters
9487117
So gonna point some things out to you real quick your story showed up as over 100k words which normally means it is a long story with many chapters however due to how much you typed to describe powers and crap instead of putting a list of powers and then put the descriptions in another chapter or at least the links to where the abilities are explained.
9556050
Good to see you going the “Don’t Get Cocky” route on how to do the story heck I plan to do something similar but not use the merchant or discord or Celestia or Luna but someone and something unexpected to give my character his powers.
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eeeeewwwww oolong tea?!
thats like PIG juices in tea form!
Aren't we IMMUNE to magic?
If so... This wouldn't really work.