A bit fast and short for my taste, but I think this is going to be interesting, but I suggest you use Google doc or Grammarly so there won't be too many errors in your Chapters.
As seras Victoria in hellsing ultimate abridged said “oh fuck the hell yes” I love it it’s like, don’t you dare, don’t underestimate me, and the og don’t get cocky sept not in the same world god speed you magnificent basterd and make more of this.
I originally had a regular, normal, boring, uneventful life. I was a history and physics teacher at Harvard University.
I'm sorry. A NORMAL, uneventful life, but you are a physics AND history teacher at Harvard? One of the most well know ivy league schools in America? There is nothing Normal about that.
9179033 *le-sigh* Why are people so judgemental? If you don't like it, would you kindly go fuck off somewhere else? I get it. Its not perfect, but it ain't the worst either.
what a steal man all the items combined I would estimate (assuming that they are master level quality) would cost at bare minimum 130k and this merchant practically gives it all away for 7k (rounding up)
well that was fun...... it would be more fun if it was well written out, i know this is your first try writing a displaced. keep on trying to write it well, you'll eventually get better! i for one like displaced/HIE/STU like stories, who doesnt like displaced stories? a lot of people well Fuck You inner voice no one likes you!
"I'll take the assassin's mask , the Paarthurnax statue , the Aldrin statue , the Deathwing statue , the Durnehviir statue , the Sindragosa statue , the sayin tail along with the capsule corps. Hyperbolic Time Chamber and gravity room capsules and Gogeta's vest, those three books of magic, that syringe with the blacklight virus in it, Ichigo's swords , Sasuke's Rinnegan and Naruto's Nine tails Sage Mode , discord's lion paw glove and the smoozes hat and bow tie, a piece of ambrosia from Hercules the Legendary Journey, kenichi's armguards, a Skyrim medallion, Dante's sword and guns , the statue of rava as well as the stones with the elements carved into them, two lightsabers with the Grey Jedi oth (one had a white gem the other one had a black gem) also those two keychains of Bahamut and Fenrir ." I told him.
OP POWAHS ACTIVATE!
Every Villian in a 1000000 mile radius: I think I just shat myself....
A bit fast and short for my taste, but I think this is going to be interesting, but I suggest you use Google doc or Grammarly so there won't be too many errors in your Chapters.
fun to read. just need more chapters
Ooooh looks ilke fun.
>Rated ‘Mature’
>Censors the “fuck” words.
Am I being baited?
hmm... im glad you have a different start from don't get cocky. i'll keep an eye out for more
You got 1 up . 👍👏Now continue ✍🔰
As seras Victoria in hellsing ultimate abridged said “oh fuck the hell yes” I love it it’s like, don’t you dare, don’t underestimate me, and the og don’t get cocky sept not in the same world god speed you magnificent basterd and make more of this.
I will need more chapters on this story
Ok wth I'm getting dejavu
MORE!
Too bad you didn't involve Tokyo ghoul powers in it
I'm sorry. A NORMAL, uneventful life, but you are a physics AND history teacher at Harvard? One of the most well know ivy league schools in America? There is nothing Normal about that.
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Thank you for pointing that out I just fixed it
8947162 I am sadly going to have to agree with you on this one Hamster.
...Do you need an editor?
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Yes
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Grammarly
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Lawl.
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Oh. Its you.
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Don't like? Don't read.
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*le-sigh*
Why are people so judgemental? If you don't like it, would you kindly go fuck off somewhere else? I get it. Its not perfect, but it ain't the worst either.
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Thank you for pointing that out I just fixed it
what a steal man all the items combined I would estimate (assuming that they are master level quality) would cost at bare minimum 130k
and this merchant practically gives it all away for 7k (rounding up)
well that was fun......
it would be more fun if it was well written out, i know this is your first try writing a displaced.
keep on trying to write it well, you'll eventually get better!
i for one like displaced/HIE/STU like stories, who doesnt like displaced stories?
a lot of people
well Fuck You inner voice no one likes you!
OP POWAHS ACTIVATE!
Every Villian in a 1000000 mile radius: I think I just shat myself....
ah you just got to love a good op story once in a while
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lol