Disclaimer: The characters (except one or 2 OC’s) are property of Lauren Faust and Hasbro, this fanfic is mine and it was inspired by Bri-sta’s awesome picture “Love me!”, check out her gallery first =D!. Im focusing on Celestia so don’t expect to see much thinking or anything else from Twilight or anypony else ok?
“blablabla” normal talking
“blablabla” thinking
“BLABLABLA” shouting or internal shout if the case arrives
“Blablabla” shout or thinking or normal this means the character is doing it darkly almost dripping hate from each word
FB “Blablabla” flashback
Aww it's turned out to be a lovely little story. I'm glad you gave it a happy ending, I was actually thinking of giving the original a more "evil" ending, haha. May still do that for an alt end. Thank you so much for writing it for me
938286 It was my pleasure, thank you for letting me do this
Desperatly needs a editor,but other then that i really enjoyed this story.Have a like
nice story, but you might want to re-write the synopsis, per example into something among the lines of:
"After the wedding of her niece, Princess Celestia thinks about the burden of eternal life, and the pain it brings..."
why you do this??
you play with our feelings..you make us , you make us , but in the end..you reward us with ...
a little rushed sometimes, but other than that..this story is a masterpiece
This was great. It desperately calls for a sequel though if you ask me.
its star swirl... lol other than that good
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943176 Indeed my friend, Im very good at understanding, reading and speaking english but when it comes to writting well, I really suck.
943188 MMM, it would be nice, mind to give me a few ideas?
943282 I might add a sequel, it would be short if I do, dont promise anything though!
943498 Hahahaha, and that just made my day
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Ok.
A good synopsis gives the reader an idea of what to expect from the story, so try to tell the first portion of the story (say, the meeting with Cadence) in about three sentences, and end with a bit of foreshadowing on how Celestia reflects on her past.
tf2chan.net/archives/afanart/5-16-11%20archives/images/129629602487.png Hmm, yes, marvelous, I do enjoy very much this story, I do wonder if there will be a sequel?
I loved this story
Good job
;_;
“But, he was right, several years later he died from old age, and the pain she felt was so great and deep it almost killed her, putting her in a great cage of depression and hate to life, but she was saved thanks to her sister Moon Gazer and her best friend Drocsid”
This suddenly comes to mind.
Anyway nice story!
Well just spell check some stuff and your good to go (second language: Not really obvious :D )
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This story is great.
It's truly sad there are so many typos, because all the good elements are there otherwise. Get yourself an editor and this could really be something special.
Wait, English is your second language? Holy shit other then a few messups here and there this was really good!
Finally went to read and i must say not bad, not bad indeed.
I liked how you reimagined Celestia's past. Made me feel sorry for her
But the story is very nice I liked it.
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Gaaaaahhhh! Why do all the good Twilestia fics end right after the first kiss!? But very interesting take on Celestia's love life. Looking foward to more.
938720
Do you plan to do a continuation or sequel to this?
1519362 I do, In fact im posting an epilogue tomorrow Sunday (for me anyways) my job hasnt let me do ANYTHING in the past few months, finally finished it XD, its not long but I think its good
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I would like to see this as a full story, with what you have as just the first chapter.
1519600 Its just a One-shot, but an epilogue is required XD
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If you've been keeping track (have you?), you would know that I will now reread the chapter in Morgan Freeman's voice.
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1524961 good idea
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Indeed. I have a Morgan Freeman voice file inside my brain. I can read anything in Morgan Freeman's voice. Shame I don't actually sound like him though
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I seem to be just full of them.
I loved the first chapter and didn't feel it needed another one but this was a great addition.
The only thing I have to say is that the ending felt strange, like it was pure head canon. (Head canon I love but head canon none the less)
Overall I would say great job, was good.
-Sturrn
This has been reread and Morgan Freeman approved.
Well, that was unexpectOH GOD MY HEART!!
I love happy endings
The Spike explanation feels kinda awkward and came out of nowhere. Mastering his powers? Really? Consider: a Dragon nap on FIM last a hundred years, if nap usually doesn't last a couple of hours, why don't just consider them immortal unless killed like a Tolkien elf? Also the size problem could be fixed with as long as Spike doesn't go mad with greed he doesn't grow uncomfortably large. Lastly what's the point of making Spike a king if there is a 'Empire of Harmony'? I think you tried too hard to make a happy ending. Not everything needs to be explained and if done properly less can mean more. I wouldn't say it's bad, but the for me the ending feels off.
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I can't quite wrap my brain around a Spike / Luna pairing but i do like how everything turned out.
I like it mostly, all the mass shipping felt like you just wanted everyone to be shipped with someone ,even if it means incest, poligamy and all that.
And thats just awkward, i could more easily see Rarity be single all her life then taking even part of someones love for anyone else (Element of Generosity anyone? )
At least if i got it right and you shipped Spike with both Rarity and Luna (him marring both of them)
A few spelling mistakes, but then again, your first language isn't English. I loved this story.
1524961 I just read it in his voice and it made the story so much better
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Of course it did.
1538084>>1536868 But of course, ANYTHING read in Morgan Freeman's voice is ALWAYS better, for example, My little Dashie, Eternal, Past sins, etc, Great fics like that are great by themselves, now try reading them in his voice, it turns out as pure awesomeness, will make you cry THAT much I can assure
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Well, duh. I do that anyway. It makes every fic generally more awesome.
This is good but not great. Honestly you could've easily turned this into atleast 30k words. I still liked it though :)
1542242 now I want to read My Little Dashie in Morgans voice
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1524961
damn, now i need to re-read it so I can do that
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Buck yeah you do.
My job is very demanding, I wanted to extend this more but I just cant find the time to do it and my imagination is running low, so if anypony wants to take the epilogue and extend it you can do it, just tell me via PM.