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Celestia and Chrysalis enter negotiation to end the conflict between their respective nations. And maybe discover something else while they're at it.
*I apologize for the summary, I couldn't come up with anything better*
*If you are feeling generous you can buy me a Ko-Fi!!
**This fic is dedicated to Allusernamesweretaken for winning the small contest I did a while back. I hope it is to your liking!**
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MAN, do I have a guilty pleasure of Celestia x Chrissy stories...
This story just released and i'm already hungry for MORE.
(Don't take my greed the wrong way, I just love this one-shot).
Being the inconsiderate person I am, I want a sequel...
Fick mich, dieser Geschichte ist sehr süß!
Fuck me, this story is cute! Please continue this story!
Pacing was a bit fast, but this was adorable.
I can't get enough Chrysalestia
i don't care much for the ship, but this was good, wouldn't have minded seeing Twilights reaction though.
This story is very much to my liking
. I really appreciate that it is very much in character and the way the story progressed felt really natural. Also I enjoyed Chrysalis and Celestia discovered their feelings for each other. Great story with one of my favourite ships.
So again thank you for taking my request, you made my very happy with this story.
Quite straightforward for a crackship. I wouldn't have left the 'oh, we were drunk? ok' plot device as the magical solution and buildup, though.
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What he said.
Needs a sequel, the marriage is going to be that sequel
Also 10/10 IGN
Just some things I noticed while reading. It's a nice story, but if the comics were canon, it would be impossible or at least much more difficult... thinking of the story that tells Chrysalis' history, where she gets pretty much blown to pieces in a battle with Celestia. Still, a good story :3
*it
Missing a space after the comma after "love".
*we're
Wow. But seriously, that's not healthy at all xD
...the story is "E"-rated, isn't it?
You crazy-- you receive a mustache for that.
*if
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7454070 Sorry. This is a stand alone. Glad you liked it though.
7454138 I admit Romance is not my forte. It's hard for me to create a plot around it.
7454261 I thought of including Twilight, but decided against it mainly because I couldn't find a way to make her feel natural into the story.
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7454388 It was meant to be straightforward XD.
7454446 No sequel, sorry. Thanks for the rating though
7454828 Glad you liked it and thanks for pointing those errors. I don't mix comics, EQG and the show together. I see them as their own universes. I love Portal and Glados.
And now I realize why I ship this. That was too cute!!
7454959 Ohh, that's an interesting take on that. It solves a great deal of problems with the series and connections to the "stuff other then the series"
And I still need to play through portal
Poor tsundere Chrysalis. "I-it's not like I LIKE you or anything, Sunbutt!"
Snrk, that went well.
Sunbutt was no match for the perfectly perky, pump and pokable posterior of Bugbutt.
I can't believe this wasn't linked yet:
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Things progress too fast to feel truly natural, plus you could have used a bit more proof-reading, but not it's not too bad, I think you just need to keep practicing writing.
I think there's a natural tendency for writers to want to rush to the ending that you have to fight.
Hmmm interesting take :) well written but feels just a bit rushed.
I like the idea you had for the naming of the changelings ^^ personally I find it way better than the one in the show itself
Nice portal reference too :)
*ahem*
SOMEDAY LOVE WILL FIND YOU
BREAK THOSE CHAINS THAT BIND YOU
ONE NIGHT WILL REMIND YOU
HOW WE TOUCHED AND WENT OUR SEPARATE WAYS