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How long has Princess Luna been alive? It was a question that even the princess in question can't answer completely. It's not her fault. When you become an immortal goddess, time practically loses all meaning and the years fly by in the blink of an eye. It was hard to remember exactly what happened when or who did what at a certain point. It was hard to even remember her own birthday. It's a good thing her daughters were there to remind her.
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That has got to be one of the CUTEST!!!!!! MOMMY LUNA FICS EVER!!!!!
Sweet Celestia, the adorableness almost gave me a heart-attack!
The D’awwwww is strong with this one! Good job!
Dawww this is cute.
Well, that ending sucks
Da fuck with that ending....
... Oh. Oh, wow just ow. That was beautiful and sweet and adorable and then...
I presume the idea is it is Luna trying to come to terms with never being able to have children of her own, possibly due to thinking that she would never find love? Very poignant... painful, almost, as the realization that it is just a dream that, in her mind at least, would never come true... So she crafted a dreamscape in which she can live her impossible fantasy.
Well done mate. Well done indeed.
Bittersweet.... Just like the cake.
Nicely done mixing but cite and sad themes wonderfully together.
Glad you guys like the story and I appreciate the positive feedback. Not gonna lie, I was kinda worried about how this story would turn out. You can imagine my face when I saw it do so well. Though, I do have to ask... is there anything you think I could have improved on? I don't mind a bit of criticism every now and then.
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Only thing I think of is try to make the ending a little more clear. I got confused for a sec until I read a comment...
I'm presuming the bad ending comments came before the edits, because that was not a bad ending. Sad yes, but sad does not mean bad. I'd personally like to see an extended series where Luna turned her enemies into kids to reform them. Cute, but it was a blind side
I wish there were more stories having Luna as a mother raising both NightMare Moon and Tantabus as foals
I Googled "Drefolate" and got this fabric and some chemistry papers as the top results. If my skimming of the start of one of the articles* is correct a chemical with this as part of its name is important for its relationship to the "activation" of folic acid**. Does this relate to the chemistry of certain types of cake?
* "Enzyme Structure and Interaction with Inhibitors" by RE London 1983 (I forget how to do correct journal citations, but that should be close enough to turn in to a Google search for anyone interested.)
**It may be a byproduct or something. As I said, I only skimmed.
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I was honestly trying to make up a word. Give the cakes a fancy sounding name and such. I'm surprised that it is an actual word.
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Ah! Hardly a problem!
It may only be "HYdrOfolate" in the paper? I am not sure. Google might have been looking for similar things after running out of exact match.
Ow...Just ow.
I am now crying, thank you.
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You're welcome.
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Good stuff comrade, good stuff.
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I agree thatd be a cute series i hope someone writes that