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Well then, that was a thing.
The multiple words thing kinda grated after a while, which was probably why it was best to be as short as it was, but it does drive home an alien mindset at least.
I figured that the Tantibus was only doing what it was created to do, and was following Luna's command to its logical conclusion.
Emotions are a matter of opinion.
This is actually quite an interesting idea, you got here. A 'villain' that truly believes it's doing good. Bravo.
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Reminds me this other one: I Am Demon
I hate to be the first one to break the 'good story' chain of comments, but you've got a small grammatical error. Take a look at the end of the last Rainbow Dash-based paragraph. (Where the Tantibus is thinking 'enjoys hates appreciates')
Brilliantly done. The Tantibus is what Luna made of it. Nothing ever thinks itself in the wrong nor explicitly acts in the name of evil. Values are instilled by the environment, and a twisted upbringing will lead to a twisted mind. Great work.
It's spelled Tantabus, it's Latin for nightmare.
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I've seen both spellings, I'm pretty sure Tantibus is the original.
It doesn't look like Luna's all that right in the heart, if this is what Tantibus considers love to be.
Yikes, scary. The Tantabus is very alien, and you captured that perfectly, and the inversal of what it considers emotions. Have a like and a favorite! Especially for the three-words-at-a-time thing.
I'm sorry, the text-color changing might look brilliant on a white background, but for those of us who have dimmed their settings, it's unreadable.
This is amazing. I love this portrayal of Tantabus. Also how it calls Luna her mother and how it hates those bright emotions. It reminds me of my headcanon of Nightmare Moon, who too sees it as her duty to bring despair to ponies.
whoa, that was dark! Loved it!
6195322 So.... essentially.... her Ultron?
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I love how it thinks of Luna as The Mother. That's actually a LOT CLOSER to Ant Man and Ultron's relationship in the comic.
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I think it worked perfectly, and show cased the alien logic Luna's creation was using. It knew nothing else but making Luna suffer, which Luna TOLD IT to do.
6201459 Yeah it is.... well you know. On top of Ultron trying to rub his success in daddy's face in first.
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Movie Ultron and Comic Ultron are very different creatures.
6201610 I was just saying Ultron in general.
I love how alien the Tantabus' mindset is, here!
It just wanted to make its parent, its creator,
happyproud.I feel that my story blends well with yours, you should check my story out sometime and see for yourself
Seriously brilliant.
Poor Tantabus.
I want to hug the tantabus