To those who knew him, Angel Bunny was not the most friendly bunny in the world. He was rude, selfish, self-centered, and the list goes on. To others, he was a friend that was great to have around. Whatever the case may be, ponies and animals had a mixed opinion about him. Though no one suspected for his story to end like this.
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I ...I can't hold it!
Angel's last line was like a stab in my heart! 
That was amazing and feels-packed! Nice job! Though you have to work a little on your punctuation, and stop using multiple exclamation marks at the end of some sentences. Other than that, the pets were all in-character and everything was well done. Except for this:don't think Fluttershy would want to stop Angel's suffering and ...you know, put him to sleep instead of letting him die like that? But that's just ainor issue. Now, have my fav :')
Oh damnations, tis a stab to my heart that I read this and feel like crying.
.....I have no words to say how beautiful that was. I am actually crying over the words I just read. I would like to note that I have never done so in my entire life. Your story was so moving that I couldn't hold it in. Not only that, but it was close to the heart and this is what I've needed. Thank you.
