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During spring, Applebloom is conspicuously reminded of the absence of her parents. While helping Applejack in the attic, she finds an old but very fancy ouija board. Sweetie Belle tells them all how to use it, and they try to contact the dead.

Applebloom's mother is not who they end up contacting.

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Sleep what is that I never heard of it ever since I read this story

This is why I NEVER go near Ouija Boards...

I did a reading of this, and it will be out on January 12th! I loved this, it was the perfect mixture of sadness, dark vibes, and just a messed up story, but I loved it!

8622013
Nice. Please let me know when it is done.

i dont get it what happened at the end?

8699906
They all died because they summoned a demon. Applebloom was entering the realm of the dead.

Abandon huh? The Angel, of the Destroyer version of himself? Jk

Word of advice: Do NOT play with a Ouija board.

Really, REALLY amazing story. A good 9/10 from me. I love the little snippet of the crusaders working as counselors and stuff. Unneeded fluff, but very appreciated.

Still though, it would've been so much better if you end the story here:

Applebloom’s eyes widened.

It will give the ending much more ambiguity and focus, because since we're following Apple Bloom for the most part, it would make sense that the story ends there, instead of the after events that Bloom has no knowledge of.

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