When Fluttershy begins blacking out, she doesn't know why. Angel and Harry have been acting overly-protective of her, but when she can't control it anymore, even after asking for help from Zecora, she has to make a decision. Things get out of hoof, and she has to decide what she's going to do, and how that will affect her friends.
Especially the ones closest to her.
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Great story! The ending was wonderful as well. Amazing job.
What is that thing in the cover art next to Fluttershy?
That chapter title is spot on. Beautiful.
An interesting story, and certainly not the ending I was expecting
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Glad you all liked it.
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It is a werewolf, I believe. I am not the artist, but you can find the source there and maybe find out.
If you don't mind a bit of criticism, I would have enjoyed the story more if there had been a little less telling and more implication. There were several beats in the story which I felt fell flat because the prose spells out what's happening and being felt plainly and multiple times; I'm not all readers, of course, but I think the audience can feel something more if there's a little bit of room for interpretation. Not a lot, but enough that they feel they get there themselves.
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Can you tell me which parts you thought fell flat? Knowing which ones would help a lot.
Didn't expect that ending... I loved it!
Where was the rest of the Mane 6 from when I saw only Pinky and Fluttershy were actually doing anything and I did solution is if somebody asked Celestia for help.
What is the current state of her friends? Are they looking for a way to help her?
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They were all fine, I'm sure. Applejack wasn't near, Twilight was in her castle, and Rarity probably locked herself in her boutique. Rainbow Dash lives in the clouds, so she was fine, too. As for if they're helping, well... probably.
Well then.. not the ending I was expecting. Sad but I liked it! Well done! thanks for the nice (if not slightly depressing) fic!
So, short term solution. Every full moon, evacuate the cottage and surround it with wolfsbane, essentially keeping Fluttershy penned up inside until the full moon passes.
I always love a story with a strong Zecora presence. They are not very common, though I can understand why. It is a bold choice to tackle her speech patterns.
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Good idea!
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...and than rebuild said cottage?
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Ah, but what many fail to understand, is that rhyming can be a game so grand!