Rainbow Dash is suffering from complications during child birth that could possibly kill her. Twilight tries find some way to help Rainbow Dash, Soarin' tries to comfort her, and Scootaloo thinks about what those who are close to her mean to her
Rainbow Dash learns Scootaloo's family has been neglecting her. Can Rainbow Dash get her out and win a battle of custody for her? Now without a certain Wonderbolt's help.
Tired of living in hiding, one lamia pony decides to head out into the world. After Settling down in Ponyville, it isn't long before she makes friends with the locals. But, as she discovers, having friends increases her chances of getting discovered.
After setting out on a quest for vengance, our hero finds herself stranded in a strange land. How will she react to the strange inhabitants of this land? And how will they react to her... Unique... Appearance?
It has been 5 years since Rainbow Dash joined the Wonderbolts. and she couldn't be happier. But if this is true, then why is she haunted by the same nightmare every night? And what is it about the strange lavender unicorn that distracts her so?
Arrrrrrghhhhh!!! Cliff hangers! Very well done, although it seems a little far fetched discord can have that effect on unicorn magic. But then again it is magic, you can't really explain it. Really like this chapter and i hope to see more!
64861 ok re-replying, cus i thought my last response might be mistaken for a spoiler *cough* *cough* anywho, if it wasnt clear wat had effected her magic let me no and ill either edit it or send it to you in a message, as to not spoil it for anyone that hasnt read it yet but thank you for the positive feedback on both chapters so far
Yeah, it looks like Twilight may need help from the other Elements to complete this spell.
Still this is a great update and nice insight on Scootaloo's adoration to Rainbow Dash and how she tries to encourage her to go see Twilight.
A confused memory lost Rainbow Dash does seem kind of interesting for a storyline like this one. Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one.
65006 thanks for the feedback!! its great to see people enjoying my writing. I was a little nervous when i first posted this, have never written anything that wasnt school or work related before lol. chapter 3 shouldnt be to far away, its already written, just needs some embelishment and dialogue. by thursday definately (i have off from work then ) and one final thing
So, along with adding a description (thank you Darklordcomp ) i have added a few new tags to the story. But you guys will just have to wait and see why i chose to add them
OK. i no i promised chapter 3 a week ago... but its kinda been put on the backburner rite now... between a busy work schedule with christmas around the corner, and the fact that im having trouble getting a start for the chapter that im happy with, this chapter has dragged out way longer than intended. that being said once im done this chapter im taking a short break from this fic to work on another thats been bouncing around in my head for a few weeks now. if it turns into another time consumer (like this last chapter :/ ) then i may drop it, but its kinda drawing my attention away from further chapters, so i figured id give it a try. thank you all for your patience :D
359544 It will be continued, don't worry about that. Unfortanetly writing lately has been rather.... difficult. i wouldnt excactly call it writers block, more along the lines of lack of motivation (and concentration), ive been finding it hard to sit down and write lately, and wen i do get myself writing, i write a line or 2 then become distracted by other stuff... i curently have 1,500 words written in the next chapter, plis a couple hundred for a sidestory im releasing alongside chapter 4. im not going to make any promises timewise, just know that i AM working on it.
Interesting start, I cannot wait to see how this changes things for Rainbow Dash.
Please do keep up the good work.
definitely a good start, want more
Very interested now... can't wait to see more...
Please Please Please Write More!!! Please!
63899 Chapter 2 is well underway, im just in the the proccess of switching everything to my new computer it should be up within the week
Arrrrrrghhhhh!!! Cliff hangers!
Very well done, although it seems a little far fetched discord can have that effect on unicorn magic. But then again it is magic, you can't really explain it.
Really like this chapter and i hope to see more!
64861 ok re-replying, cus i thought my last response might be mistaken for a spoiler *cough* *cough* anywho, if it wasnt clear wat had effected her magic let me no and ill either edit it or send it to you in a message, as to not spoil it for anyone that hasnt read it yet but thank you for the positive feedback on both chapters so far
Yeah, it looks like Twilight may need help from the other Elements to complete this spell.
Still this is a great update and nice insight on Scootaloo's adoration to Rainbow Dash and how she tries to encourage her to go see Twilight.
A confused memory lost Rainbow Dash does seem kind of interesting for a storyline like this one. Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one.
65006 thanks for the feedback!! its great to see people enjoying my writing. I was a little nervous when i first posted this, have never written anything that wasnt school or work related before lol. chapter 3 shouldnt be to far away, its already written, just needs some embelishment and dialogue. by thursday definately (i have off from work then ) and one final thing
SCOOTALOO IS BEST PONY!!
Why this has no descrpition? but i'm tracking this its awesome
65237 thanks for pointing out the lack of a description, i never noticed lol ill make sure to type one up and add it now
So, along with adding a description (thank you Darklordcomp ) i have added a few new tags to the story. But you guys will just have to wait and see why i chose to add them
OK. i no i promised chapter 3 a week ago... but its kinda been put on the backburner rite now... between a busy work schedule with christmas around the corner, and the fact that im having trouble getting a start for the chapter that im happy with, this chapter has dragged out way longer than intended. that being said once im done this chapter im taking a short break from this fic to work on another thats been bouncing around in my head for a few weeks now. if it turns into another time consumer (like this last chapter :/ ) then i may drop it, but its kinda drawing my attention away from further chapters, so i figured id give it a try. thank you all for your patience :D
Moar!! We need Moar!!!
No need to rush though, i have the patience to wait for more
Hey! I'm so glad to see that you've posted this! It's sure come a long way since you first e-mailed me a couple months ago.
As far as the story goes, I eagerly await the next part. Cliffhangers are the bane of my existence
Seems we may have a love triangle with Rainbow Dash, Twilight, and Soarin.
Great chapter by the way.....
I just started reading and I am really looking forward to the next chapter. I really want to see what happens next.
Great i loved it ron cant wait for more
~neko zach...you know who i am
175404 Of course i know who you are neko... :P
176760 lolzez i kow
176760 lolzez i know
Been waitin' for sometime but it was totally worth it.
Keep up the good work Ron
so its a soarindash ?
Loving it so far ron! Keep up the good work!
Oh and scoots is definatly best pony
Hmm. This looks very interesting. I look forward to more.
hmmmm
:)
doesnt matter how long, just release the next chapter
261233 i actualy am working on it rite now :) hoping to have it out by monday
i hope to see more of this weird fanfic its concept is rather interesting.
This is great, no idea what to expect next. I hope it gets continued.
359544 It will be continued, don't worry about that. Unfortanetly writing lately has been rather.... difficult. i wouldnt excactly call it writers block, more along the lines of lack of motivation (and concentration), ive been finding it hard to sit down and write lately, and wen i do get myself writing, i write a line or 2 then become distracted by other stuff... i curently have 1,500 words written in the next chapter, plis a couple hundred for a sidestory im releasing alongside chapter 4. im not going to make any promises timewise, just know that i AM working on it.
Interesting premise, definitely deserves a watch.
Is this story dead?
1095974
Apparently.... not.
i had alot going on in my life for a while, i dont want this story to die, i just don't have alot of free time, but im gunna try to continue it.
3227291 thank goodness for that!
FINALLY OMFG
Now finish this thing!