Rainbow Dash has been traumatized by losing her wing. A wing to some Pegasi, might just be a misfortune, however for this rainbow cyan pony it's more of a symbol of a lost loved one that just died.
I am a short story, poetry, and small literature writer that writes from my heart and types into something special for the world to see.
Rainbow Dash has been traumatized by losing her wing. A wing to some Pegasi, might just be a misfortune, however for this rainbow cyan pony it's more of a symbol of a lost loved one that just died.
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Awesome a story about me
I like the idea but the execution could use a little more work. Seems a bit rushed, and there was little to no background detail on top of flat character designs. I know that these are all established characters and timelines already but that doesn't take away from the fact that there was so little characterization involved that you could've switched a couple of names and the story wouldn't be any different.
A bit rushed, but good enough for me to fave.
I'm loving the story