Many ponies have awaited the return of Tartarus's Kitchen to re open, Many have dreamed of standing in front of Chef Ramsay and succeeding. Many have attempted through previous seasons, and many have failed. Some have rose to the the top, while others have fallen to the ground. This season Chef Ramsay takes on 12 different ponies from across Equestria Each with the dream of running the famed Saddle and Gallop, located in Canterlot. The stress will be high, the emotions will be tested, and one pony will rise to the top to claim the ultimate share of 250,000 bits salary. Now begins the new season of Tartarus's Kitchen
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A funny story with a lot of potential. Although, I suggest slowing the pace a little. Add more details in some areas. Use bigger words to express tone, and be space out your format a little more.
7314771 I must agree. Great potential, but lacking in quality. The taste of this story is a bit bland, even at the more exciting and excruciating parts. Also, I would keep in mind how the characters have evolved grown in their attitudes in the last season or two so that they can play off of each other better.