Celestia and Luna's royal bard. Nature is my God, Art is my religion, Love is the Law. Concordia Invictus
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To "peak" means to reach a relatively high point, such as the top of a mountain, which is also called a "peak". I believe you meant "peeked" here, which means "to steal a glance at something". I know I'm being pedantic, but this particular mistake is one I've seen far too often across multiple online texts, and I couldn't live with myself if I didn't say anything now.
I'll finish reading the story and give you a proper review, I promise.
You sold me with the concept and title. Good work.
Very, very impressive. I like PinkieDash. Though I was confused when you said that Dash and Shy were blood sisters, thought Dash was an only child with how her parents act?
Blood sisters are like blood brothers. That is, they have an extremely close friendship. See https://www.fimfiction.net/user/201243/RoyalBardofCanterlot/stories?page=2 for more about that.
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Fixed. Thanks.
This was a pleasure to read.
This was nicely written, a very relaxing and atmospheric little slice of life. Thank you for sharing!
Hm. PinkieDash isn't my cup of tea... but this was nice, anyway. So, congrats for that.
Thank you.