Set eighteen years after my Twilight/Shining Armor trilogy.
A grave evil is brewing.
Twilight's daughter, Lilac Sky, wakes up on her eighteenth birthday, and discovers that she has become an alicorn. Apparently, there is a legend, that six young mares, well, five young mares and one young Kirin, will wake up on their eighteenth birthdays, finding that they have become alicorns, in order to stop a demon. These young mares, Lilac Sky, Cloud Storm, Apple Tart, Apple Seed, Fudge Sundae, and Ruby Gleam, the Elements of Chance.
Rated teen for swearing and violence later one, the dark tag for evil.
Chapters (11)
Hmm..
Interesting concept!
Only thing I must ask:
Wat the buck is a kirin?
Lol but good story.
I will fav and follow, and you earned a like! :D
~Rosalynn~
you got me fav like love
914195 It's like a horse... but with scales. I'll let you put two and two together.
914293
*thinks*
OHH MY GOD
HOLY...
AWWWHHHHHHHHH!!!!
*dies*
Dat's so cute
Awwwhh....
WAit a minute...
...Rarity's a pedophile...
LOL NONONO IM KIDDING!! xD
Sorry fans of Rarity.
I like her too, I just.. I had to...
Awwwhhh... Spikity....
~Rosalynn~
914307 not exactly the reaction I was expecting, but okay. And actually, the ship is called Sparity, but whatevs. Glad you like it, And I'm excited to see all of the positive impact this has gotten just in the first day.
914723
Lol I wasn't being serious about the whole "Pedophile" comment..
It was a kiinda a joke
Sorry if it sounded serious
But yeah, I really like it
and ohh yeah...
it IS Sparity..
^///^
~Rosalynn~
awsome job please hurry up with all the oter chapters and id be happy to edit them for you
Why is Twilight the Ponyville librarian if she lives in Canterlot?
914971. I myself am an editor so I don't need help, but thanks for the offer.
915024 She's the former librarian, as explained in my trilogy, and she lives in the castle now.
914776 It's alright!
and no need to be embarrassed, I used to call it Spikirar... yeah...
915257 actually, Kirin are seen more as a deer than a horse or, in this case, pony. sorry about correcting you if that's what i did, but im a huge mythology nut. just a quick question, but can the kirin in this story command lightning?
915355 sorry, but I've only ever heard of them in a Sparity fic, so yeah. And no she can't. but when she's an alicorn she'll have pretty kickass powers.
915257
Lol yeah.
I inda suck at some shipping names
Oh well though! :3
Good story so far...
ONLY PINKIE!
ONly thing I could think of when it said Pinkie's daughter's name?
Pinkie WOULD name her daughter Fudgie...
Lol
~Rosalynn~
Good story.
I COMMAND YOU TO WRITE MOAR. please?
WAit... She's pregnant?!
Did you ever somewhat say that in the chapter?
If you did, I musta missed it.. cuz I'm stupid..
And... are AJ and Fluttershy married?
Or just living together..?
Or married?
And nice Trollestia in there
Lol
Again, great story, interesting concept..
And oh... about how old are the mane six, in revelation to another adult pony in the show?
~Rosalynn~
917790 I didn't actually say it, but waddling, being uncomfortable, it's all there. And they just live together because one of my otp's for this show is FlutterMac. Put the pieces together. There you go.
And as for the age thing, I like to think that they're about 19 in the show, end of the trilogy ending five years later, and then this is eighteen years after that, so they're about the same age as the Cakes in the show.
917854
Oh yeah x.x
Ha-derp I feel stupid :3
And ohh...
Another ha-derp-i-feel-stupid moment for Rosalynn!
That's like 5 in one day!
Yaaay!
lol.
and as for the age thing: Ohh.
Alright.
That makes sense :D
~Rosalynn~
Oh I can't wait for the next chapter! Very well written, they seem pretty in character, the daughters definitely seem like they are like their mothers, and how did I know you were going to put a Trollestia in there
Why the hell isn't this on EQD?
920854 thank you so much! Originally, this was just going to be about Lilac, but I ran out of ideas for that half-way through the prologue, so I thought, "Use all the mane six's kids!" And I'm happy how this is turning out. And really, you think this is EQD material?
thanks!
921156 Definitely EQD material. Also...you know your a noob when it takes you 5 minutes to find the "reply" button...
LOL!
Who?
When Pinkie and her daughter broke the forth wall..
She Ca-raazy.
haha
And... she alsready lost one sibling?
And can you clear something up for me?
Who is who's child?
I know Twilight Sparkle is Lilac Sky's mother,
And Rainbow is CloudStorm's mother...
But can you like make a list for me of who is who's kid?
Sorry if it's a burden-- you don't have to-- I was just wonderin'
~Rosalynn~
O.O
922841
sure:
Twilight/Oc-Lilac
Dash/Soarin-Cloudstorm, Flamesoar, baby that I haven't named yet.
Fluttershy/Big Mac-Apple Tart, Apple Blossom, Meadow Lark
Rarity/Spike-Ruby Gleam, Amythist Shine
AJ/One night stand-Apple Seed
Pinkie/Caramel-Fudgie, Sprinkles
And as for the lost sibling, all will be revealed later... Okay, fine. Fluttershy had a miscarriage. Did I just make you cry? Good.
923381
Oh thanks! Haha :3
I'll save this for reference :D
and...
Fuh...fuh....
Flutershy
POOR FLUTTERSHY!
SHE DOESn'T DESERVE THIS MISTREATMENT!!!
lol.
no but seriously
~Rosalynn~
Yay new chapter. Why so many dislikes
939354 now now. people can have opinions. Besides, the positive feedback I've gotten outweighs the negative.
939489 I was just a little surprised. Keep up the great work
> I apologize for the tears I cause
Oh shit...
>Fluttershy coughed violently.
NU. DON'T YOU DARE.
>Cure
YES
>cure was, "blood of the first born."
NONONONONONONO
A few paragraphs later...
942630 Sorry! But I had to! The story won't go anywhere for another two chapters and I wanted to put something!
I sorry, but it needed to be done. If it helps, I felt awful for killing her. I curled up in a ball and cried for ten minutes straight.
942748 YOU HORRIBLE PERSON!!! DISLIKE, UNWATCH, UNFAVORITE.
GOOD DAY TO YOU SIR.
Or keep my like, favorite, and watch because this story is too awesome XD.
And I can't really yell at you since I killed Pinkie Pie in my story...in the first chapter...rather dramatically...
943896 hypocrite. And I am not a sir, I am a miss. So good day to you! also, ponies. and I already told you that I feel horrible!
943967
I sorreh, miss.
945820 please don't be angry...
it was either kill her
or Dash
Alright, vote time. Who wants me to re-write chapter five where she doesn't die?
946363 Not me. Even thought Fluttershy best pony. It makes it more interesting.
So...
Spike X Rarity
Fluttershy X Big Macintosh
Ranbow Dash X Soarin'
Orion X Twilight Sparkle
Pinkie Pie X ???
AppleJack X ???
Who AJ and Pinkie's Stallions? I must know.
947454 Pinkie's is Caramel
AJ had a one night stand, because I was too lazy to come up with a name.
947591 So, she hooked up with a guy, hes unknown.
Uhm, did he marry her and leave her, did he die, or did they never date?
947643 I'll expla it later in one of my other stories later, but for now, here's the short version:
AJ was feeling really down so she got drunk at a bar, hooked up with a guy, and never saw him again. Four weeks later, she discovered that she was pregnant. Any other questions?
947753 Nope, but a picture.
ponibooru.org/post/view/79895?search=apple_cider
947769 No picture showed up. Perhaps you could send it to me in a pm.
O.K. (Didn't show up for me either.)
I vote keep chapter 5 the same. Yeah she dies
but it makes the story interesting. It could also add potential epic rage outbursts during the fight or whatever from her daughter.
965194 Interesting idea. I might just have to use that! Thanks. Chapter six would be up by now, but as I'm extremely lazy- wait! no! I'm busy with marching band right now , ansmd won't have time to write for a little while. Sorry about that...
965897 Lol, for some reason ideas like to flood through my mind. My friends think I'm really weird sometimes
What instrument to you play? I used to play clarinet when I was nine.
966107 I play flute, piccolo, and oboe, but I can't actually march yet because I'm too young, so I help by lugging equipment around the bleachers and feild during games. I'm a band aide. get it?
966141 xD
Elvis approves of their daughters shipping.
However Elvis says that BronyDerp117 is mainly TwiDash.
Elvis has now left the building.
973300 I knew that my most faithful reader would complete the whole thing! Congratulations, because for doing so, you get an Internet cookie! (::) It's chocolate chip. Twi Dash is okay, but I just think AJ and RD are just so similar, that it's impossible for them not to be together...
Well by brothers and sisters... today is a sad day for brony kind. Justin Bieber is a brony, and he's trying to do brohoofs on the Internet.
we're all doomed.