Chapter 5
A/N: Hi there. Some of you are going to hate me for this chapter. I'm really sorry, but there has been no drama yet, and the story needs to pick up. I apologize for the tears I cause, here's chapter 5.
Fluttershy coughed violently. She had been bed ridden for a few days, and was getting worse. Dash, Tart, and Blossom never left her side. She'd had a fever for three days, and was progressively getting worse. The girls tried to stay strong for Meadow Lark, but it was getting hard. Twilight had been rushing around for a cure, Lilac following her mother's suit. Rarity was taking care of the yellow pegasus, and was doing well, but it wasn't enough. Then, finally, Twilight figured out what was wrong.
The purple unicorn walked in Shy's room with a heavy heart. "I've figured out what you have, and the cure, but you're not going to like it." The disease was called "Monounrescalpia", and the cure was, "blood of the first born." Twilight said. "It will cost Tart's life."
"I'll do it!" Apple Tart was quick to her hooves. "Besides, maybe if I do, the evil creature won't arrive!"
"It's too late," Celestia said, standing in the doorway, "The transformation has occurred, so it will count."
Fluttershy touched her hoof to her daughter's cheek. "It's fine Tart. I'm not worth all of Equestria." There was a tear in her eye as she embraced her oldest daughter, and then her middle daughter.
"I love you mommy, please don't go! Please, Meadow needs you!"
"I know Blossom, but I don't have a choice. I love you." Mac entered with Meadow, just before Shy closed her eyes, and held her as she did. Pinkie, Fudgie, and Sprinkles' manes all deflated, Dash and Storm ran from the room crying, Soarin, Flamesoar, and a now three year old Comet went after them. Rarity burst into tears, with Spike holding her, Ruby and Amethyst rubbing up against her. Twilight and Lilac clung to each other, softly sobbing. Apple Jack bawled over the loss of her sister-in-law, and Seed over the loss of her aunt. But Tart, while her father and sisters cried, stood silently, with no emotion in her eyes, or on her face.
A week had passed since Fluttershy had passed on. There was a huge procession for the holder of Kindness' funeral, and it felt like all joy had disappeared from the Castle, especially in Tart's heart. "Why? Why did she have to go?" Apple Tart had been calling this out for a week, holding her sisters close and crying with them.
After a few weeks had passed from the funeral, things went more or less back to normal, ponies still cried, Tart and Blossom the hardest, but business went on as usual and Fudgie was approaching her eighteenth birthday, and as the first earth pony to transform, was preparing for twice the amount of pain as the other groups had experienced. On the night before her birthday, however, she discovered that there was no pain that she could feel, because her heart was already so heavy.
Fudge Sundae's transformation was the only joy they had experienced in a few weeks, albeit Pinkie trying to get every pony to smile, saying that Shy would want them not to cry. Then, suddenly, one day, every pony woke up smiling, because they realized that they shouldn't be mourning Fluttershy's death, but rejoicing in her life. And that's exactly what they did that day.
A/N: Sorry for the shortness, I couldn't get over the fact that I just killed Fluttershy, and felt like I needed a hug, but kept writing until I couldn't anymore. I love you guys, and I apologize for the tears I caused.
> I apologize for the tears I cause
Oh shit...
>Fluttershy coughed violently.
NU. DON'T YOU DARE.
>Cure
YES
>cure was, "blood of the first born."
NONONONONONONO
A few paragraphs later...
942630 Sorry! But I had to! The story won't go anywhere for another two chapters and I wanted to put something! I sorry, but it needed to be done. If it helps, I felt awful for killing her. I curled up in a ball and cried for ten minutes straight.
942748 YOU HORRIBLE PERSON!!! DISLIKE, UNWATCH, UNFAVORITE.
GOOD DAY TO YOU SIR.
Or keep my like, favorite, and watch because this story is too awesome XD.
And I can't really yell at you since I killed Pinkie Pie in my story...in the first chapter...rather dramatically...
943896 hypocrite. And I am not a sir, I am a miss. So good day to you! also, ponies. and I already told you that I feel horrible!
943967
I sorreh, miss.
945820 please don't be angry... it was either kill her or Dash
Alright, vote time. Who wants me to re-write chapter five where she doesn't die?
946363 Not me. Even thought Fluttershy best pony. It makes it more interesting.
So...
Spike X Rarity
Fluttershy X Big Macintosh
Ranbow Dash X Soarin'
Orion X Twilight Sparkle
Pinkie Pie X ???
AppleJack X ???
Who AJ and Pinkie's Stallions? I must know.
947454 Pinkie's is Caramel
AJ had a one night stand, because I was too lazy to come up with a name.
947591 So, she hooked up with a guy, hes unknown. Uhm, did he marry her and leave her, did he die, or did they never date?
947643 I'll expla it later in one of my other stories later, but for now, here's the short version:
AJ was feeling really down so she got drunk at a bar, hooked up with a guy, and never saw him again. Four weeks later, she discovered that she was pregnant. Any other questions?
947753 Nope, but a picture.
ponibooru.org/post/view/79895?search=apple_cider
947769 No picture showed up. Perhaps you could send it to me in a pm.
O.K. (Didn't show up for me either.)
I vote keep chapter 5 the same. Yeah she dies but it makes the story interesting. It could also add potential epic rage outbursts during the fight or whatever from her daughter.
965194 Interesting idea. I might just have to use that! Thanks. Chapter six would be up by now, but as I'm extremely lazy- wait! no! I'm busy with marching band right now , ansmd won't have time to write for a little while. Sorry about that...
965897 Lol, for some reason ideas like to flood through my mind. My friends think I'm really weird sometimes
What instrument to you play? I used to play clarinet when I was nine.
966107 I play flute, piccolo, and oboe, but I can't actually march yet because I'm too young, so I help by lugging equipment around the bleachers and feild during games. I'm a band aide. get it?
966141 xD
you horrible person bring fluttershy back please
Alright, what the hell did you do?
I don't care about Fluttershy, I mean the STORY.
Holy shit, if you wanted drama, you could have done a lot better. Not let her die like that, just let it drone on till the end to cause more drama. But instead, you just went "Dead!" And killed Fluttershy off for little drama effect. Such a waste.