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Chrysalis has taken Canterlot, the Elements of Harmony are captured and Celestia and Cadence are in her grasp, everything has gone according to her plans, she could just sing about how perfect this day has been.
Too bad three fillies, one night princess, and four other hives have something to say about that.
Cover art by Siansaar go show them some love.
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Great story so far, I can't wait to see what happens next, and Scootaloo being a Changeling Princess, should have seen that one coming, also do any of the other Hives feed off of Lust instead of Love like Chrysalis Hive does?
So good so far, I hope I can read more of this story
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The Ruby's primary source is lust, it has to do with what city their hive is located in, that's coming up soon.
Humm not the first story with Changeling Scootaloo, first I've seen where she is a princess too. I am pleased you didn't feel the need to remove Shineing and Cadance's victory and included the whole "Celestial held back" explanation for why she lost to Chrysalis.
Well, time to add another story to the tracking list. :P
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It's like people expected Celestia to go all out, but they forget that calling the power of the SUN might be harmful to others in the area, also yes the 'love shield bomb' [you find a better name] is actually needed.
Oh joy... another fic for me to track....
I need more!
also... there are a few errors here and there
that should be "wielded"
missing and "e" from Belle
"thy" is the possessive form of "thou" which mean "your" and "you" respectively. i checked
I believe that should "HUZZAH" since i remember Luna saying that and not "HAZZA"
I think that's all i saw. might have missed some but also might not have missed any. hope this helps
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Is it just me or is Chryssi continually defeated by her food? It's like getting smacked around by a sandwich.
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To be fair, i have yet to see a sandwich with a horn using magic.
Very good story, and an interesting concept, this.
Have a Fave, a Track, a Follow and an Upvote for it.
Also, I think that this is one of the few (if any) stories about the Royal Wedding (or on any level, for that matter) that Celestia has had knowledge of the Changeling Hives, let alone have one of their Princesses as her student.
I also particularly liked this bit:
Now that, I really like!
I also like the bit where two of the Emerald Changelings formed armor for Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle.
Very nice.
This guy sounds like Sweetie Belle when one of the CMCs plans goes "somewhat" awry.
8381883 No, it ain't just you, and yup.
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Felt just a tad fast on pacing, but otherwise pretty good
So Scootaloo as a changeling princess?, nice how interesting.
8381883 Heh, sandwich. I know that fish can be weaponized. SANDWICHES could be a throwing weapon.
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Or club is the bread is stale enough.
8382426 What about salami or ham?
It's Sweetie Belle.
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Thanks for that, all patched up now
Nice start hope to see more on short time
Very cool chapter, with some very cute moments.
I heartily approve, and eagerly await Chapter 3.
I think that should "lamented"
Also...
think that should be "were"
As with all post season 6 stories involving changelings I am curious what throax did here. Did he get hit by the shield, surrender or hide among the population of Canterlot?
And another good and funny chapter I'm can't wait for the next one
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Hey, Xanderfox was asking you about Thorax, did he get hit by the shield, surrender or hide among the population of Canterlot?
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I had not really given much thought to Thorax, how ever now I have something special in mind.
And to answer your question, no he was not in Canterlot.
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I see.
Why, by Luna's moon, am i not surprised?
Also.... 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
I'd hardly call those subtle differences!
Enter the heat of battle!
ENGAGE!!!!!
You might need to work on ye olde vernacular. That should go better as "Thou art truly a fool if thou thinkest that our sister should'st fall so easily in combat. Our sister merely wish'd not to destroy our fair city with her might."
(wince) *Ahem*. That would be skewer, i believe.
8399211 There is actually a reason for this
8399219 fixed
Okay, THAT was funny!
Ooh! I like that.
Throne not thrown
Please continue this is a great story.
Sweet new chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next, will Twilight take notes about the hive or even take pictures of what the hive looks like on the inside. Another thing will pinkie sneak some love to taste, because I SO want to see Super Hyper Pinkie Pie on a LOVE high, it would be funny to see how crazy she will be from tasting some love.
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Hmmmm a love high pinkie, perhaps.
Viewing of the hive is coming soon, I hope it doesn't disappoint.
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Hey! I'm not that hyper!
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Only if you eat some of the Love that the Changelings have stored up, heck you could out race Super Sonic and Rainbow Dash, when she is flying at Sonic Rainboom speed, of course after the love clears your system I bet you would crash badly and sleep for several days to get back your lost energy that was used up.
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Pinkie on refined love will be like Twilight on Irn Bru.
Beware the elusive typo, they will strike when least expected. Aided by their minion spell check.
were we the flower fillies [ We were ]
I'd like to get back home today. Scootaloo laminated. [ lamented ]
Twilight guessed they weren't just statuses. [statues ]
Applejack asked indicating one of the statuses. [ statues ]
So far so good.
WE NEED LOTS AND LOTS OF ART FOR THIS FIC!!!
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Glad you're enjoying it.
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I would not be opposed to this
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The least we need is an illustration of the Emerald hive.
I like changeling princess Scootaloo.
A good story so far, even if it would need someone to proofread it.
8642884 It's gonna be a lotta work for the cleaning crew. I hope they get a better reward for ALL the shenanigans.
8643380 Especially because of Pinkie. Pinkie's pretty much enough reason to set up an appointment with the psychiatrists and psychologists and having to be with her for long periods of time would hafta be taxing on anyone's sanity, really. If not Pinkie, then I pity the poor souls that hafta deal with Twilight's neurosis or Rainbow's ego, which I might add is the size of UY Scuti.