Please feel free to comment, it's the only way I'll learn.
On a solitary night, Princess Luna sits, watching her sky and knowing that nopony appreciates her work. Yet, just as the princess sinks to her lowest, a filly known as White Eclipse comes to share in the night the princess created. And so begins a tale of friendship as the regent of the moon learns that everypony needs compassion, and that it can come from the most unlikely of sources.
based off of the comic of the same name by willis96.deviantart.com, and I received his express permission to write this.
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How nice,Luna has a friend.
Loved the comic, loved the fic thumbs up!
998818 Thank you very much.
I have read the comic also and it is good to see someone do it justice
999528 Thanks a bunch
As soon as I saw the comic, I thought "Oh, this is crying for a fic!" and so here we are.
This is so gorgeous..Honestly Luna is my favorite ponie, she makes me feel sad how nopony appreciates her.
Please continue
I have seen the comic and i think the way your writing this im going to end up in tears, oh and by the way thank you i love the way this is going.
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You are most welcome, and don't worry. I have a feeling that the ending will be satisfying for all.
999730 ^ ^
I love this but one question what time. Period does this take place in.
is it before Luna became nightmare moon if so then you could say that the reason Luna became nightmare moon was someone murdered the only pony who actually cared about Luna.
If not then your completely wrong in terms that celestia used the "royal we" more then Luna.
Otherwise great story and I cant wait for more
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It is pre-banishment, and I do have a conflict in mind that explains why she turned into Nightmare Moon.
As for the royal we, I did some digging, and monarchs would only do that when they were representing their land and their people, as they were speaking for the wants and needs of the kingdom. When speaking of themselves, they would stick to "I". The reason I have Celestia use it more often is twofold: first, Celestia is the one that receives more attention from the populace during this time period, and so she would be more used to having to keep up the mannerisms of a proper monarch. Secondly, it's a headcanon of mine that Luna would be more of the "pony's princess", in that she can relate better to the common folk of Equestria, and would be more likely to adopt their speech and mannerisms.
Thanks for the feedback, and I do hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Very nice
Dude, you just took me on all emotions possible for a story. I commend you. That was amazing. Green thumb, yellow star, black eye, the works, man. I don't believe how great that was, so well written.
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Thank you so much for the kind words!