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Mark Young


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“Weapons of untold power. The might of an Alicorn—concentrated into a single squad of ponies. Look at our glory, brother! Your inventions put to mass production, with my leadership and bold tenacity. Together, we will push Equestria into new heights of prowess!”

Through a sudden surge in technical inventions stemming from the ability to hold and store magical energy, the ponies of Equestria find themselves no longer dependent on the princesses to rule and protect them. The Canterlot Observatory houses the ability to raise the sun and moon, and new weaponry has given the ponies the strength needed to take matters into their own hooves.

The age of "might makes right" is now an old shadow of the setting sun. And with their reign coming to a close, the princesses must make a wise decision fast as their enemies close in. With the political pressure on them, the fellowship of Twilight's friends is breaking, and it could be that a Sonic Rainboom that tied them together in the beginning will now be a signal for the end.

This is the prequel to the unfolding events of the three-part story series Princess.

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“Weapons of untold power. The might of an Alicorn—concentrated into a single squad of ponies. Look at our glory, brother! Your inventions put to mass production, with my leadership and bold tenacity. Together, we will push Equestria into new heights of prowess!”

So I take it the Flim Flam Brothers said that?

Hmm, so the evil empire rises to power in the name of 'progress' and 'enlightenment' via conquest, demonization of the old system and treachery. I would guess the rest of the world will be next in the name of 'enlightenment'.

There is only one thing I dislike about this and its something that always annoys me. The power of the alicorn princesses had NOTHING to do with turning Discord to stone, that was the elements of harmony. If the power of the alicorns was enough to stop him, even stone him, than Celestia would have just trained up Cadence and herself, and later Luna.

Other than that, not bad. Albeit, I've seen stuff like it a few times, but not bad. Not something I particularly love, but I can't say it wasn't well done.

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