• Member Since 28th Jun, 2013
  • offline last seen February 25th

The Devious Writer


"Inspiration comes and goes; that's neither a good or bad thing. It just means that I'm going to sit here and be lazy until I don't want to be." ~Some a**hole who quotes himself.

E
Source

A burst of energy from the heavens, felt by every being from Discord himself to the little foal crying next door. Mysterious golden rings rained from the sky, dropping to Equestria, almost as if with a purpose. With rings scattered throughout the lands, all holding untold power, the Princesses send for an immediate investigation, including themselves and the Mane Six.

What secrets do the rings hold? Who or what sent them to Equestria, if anything at all? Would they prove a threat to the nation? Despite their awesome power and years of experience, nopony, be it the Princesses, the Elements of Harmony, or even Discord, had been prepared for what was to come.
...
Okay, maybe Discord was, but it's Discord.
...
Maybe Pinkie too, she has emergency cakes stashed all over Ponyville!


So, a Pokémon crossover! And game-centric, so don't expect anything from the anime to pop up. Not certain whether humans will pop up at all, though it's 50/50 in my head right now. The name and cover art aren't my final choices, though I'm not sure what I have in mind.


I'm the only one that's edited this, and while I do personally think I'm a fairly good editor, a nitpicky person, and one with high expectations too, I know for a fact I tend to become blind when it's my own work. So, feel free to tell me why this story sucks. But don't tell me that the story sucks. Kay? Just why would really be nice.


Hey, this is on the 5th page when you click on More Popular Stories on the Homepage for a while! Didn't expect that at all! Thanks to everyone that added this to their Favourites, and everyone that's viewed or liked as well!


Cover art by Ken Sugimori.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

Whoops, I added this to the wrong part of the Pokémon Fics group (The One-Shot folder). How do I remove it? The "Delete this Story" button on the page kind of scares me...

This story needs more chapters.

Like now.

6375139 Perhaps tomorrow! :pinkiehappy:Or a year from now? :pinkiesick: Who knows, it's me... :pinkiecrazy:

But seriously, I think it'll be done by next weekend, if not earlier. School's starting for me on the first of September, and I have no idea how much work I could get in the first week. But I doubt any big project could eat up my weekend.
Unfortunately, I only have about a fourth of it written, and I edited Chapter 1 three times to get it to how it is now (and one time I was feeling particularly inspired, which was also when I wrote that quarter of Ch2 I mentioned, before I fell asleep with my iPad.)

6375197 It's all good, I just like to know that the stories I'm reading aren't dead.

6374801 Ask a moderator or admin in the group for help.

“Hey, I didn’t say that. I said that those things suddenly and massively broke and there just so happens to have been a bunch of evidence that the Legendary Pokémon were the reason. I really wasn’t expecting it, either! I think I had to send a spell back to Equestria just to create an exact copy of me! I’m still looking for the real me, by the way.”
What.



That line is GENIUS, and completely in-character for Discord.





You, my good sir, have received a fave!

6386775 Thank you! I'm currently in the process of editing these 2 chapters, as well as changing it to first person.

Lugia=ginyu
Ho-oh=jeice
Articuno=recoome
Zapdos=burter
Moltres=guldo

The ginyu force of Pokemon

Login or register to comment