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Mark Young


Chopsticks, rice pone.

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When Discord submits a formal complaint to the Equestrian Postal Service, he says if the next mail delivery doesn't arrive in a timely fashion, he will plant a baby chaos monster in all the mail and packages delivered throughout Equestria!

It's up to Gabby and Derpy to try and save Equestria's only mailing service. Will they make it? Will they make it BACK? Will a giant purple monster take them away and keep them there... forever?

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Ha. That was an amusing read through. Gabby seems a little bit jaded about not getting her Cutie Mark though, with her couple of mentions about "I could have gotten a Cutie Mark in X!" The mail ponies seem determined to not lose Derpy since she bakes good muffins, but alas, ensuring a timely delivery to everypony, even Discord, is more important than good muffins.

What a delightful ending, too, with the reveal of the letter.

The mail pony reached behind the counter and pulled up a basket. “Please take a muffin on us,” he bent below again and came up with a discount card in his mouth. Discord screeched his teeth together and looks at the words in this paragraph to ensure what is happening is really happening. Seriously, is this all I am to you readers? Discord thinks beyond the fourth wall. Comedic relief in the form of irony? Satirizing my self-depreciating situations with surreal comedy?

Don't look at me Discord I'm only reading not a writer 😅

Derpy looked confused. “Uh—not last I checked. But I haven’t seen a doctor to be sure. Oh, except the Doctor, but I don’t think he’s that kind of doctor.”

Well she's right this doctor is an actual time traveling Pony

This was a really crazy Adventures of derpy and it was pretty cool that she teamed up with Gabby as well just to deliver a mail to Discord because yeah his realm is a little crazy but somehow two of them made it through even though Gabby got herself caught but Derpy finally got to her destination give it to the mail Discord and what he found out it was actually a fan mail from dinky Derpy's little one it was pretty flattered that somebody actually like him that was a pretty sweet and crazy adventure awesome job keep up the good work 😊

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