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Red is my favorite color

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Gallus has always lived a harsh life. No home, no family, no friendship. He always had to get by on his own. Dive into what it was like for young Gallus to live on the cold, unforgiving streets of Griffonstone.

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Every year, Gallus had caught the virus, and every year he suffered horribly. He remembered not being able move because of the raging fever, and couldn’t feed himself to recover faster. The pain he’d endured from the illness never fully went away. The feeling of his lungs suffocating and his angry migraines was forever engrained into his memory. He’d never understood why he survived every year, he was sure every year that he’ll be the first to die. The young griffon loathed the others that got that pass.

So he will forever feel it?

When he climbed into his temporary box, he’d found a small piece of fabric that lined the bottom. Gallus picked it up between his claws.

I’m guessing that’s from rarity?

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Maybe if Griffons get things imported for Equestria

Thank you, gabby. Also, I’m glad Gilda didn’t recognize him, because he would have been dead right then and there.

Gabby a better griffin than all her family.

“... read ?” Gallus parroted back. What was this ‘read’ thing?

How every student in school feels. Also, does the release date says sept 9th for anyone else? Also, I think there’s a grammar mistake in the story.

Comment posted by Pete100 deleted Sep 14th, 2020

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Yeah uh I kinda wrote this way ahead of time before my story got approved, and Im just republishing the chapters again.

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Is that how it works?

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I mean is that why it said it came out on sep 9th even though it’s sep 14?

I'll pull the story into a G-doc and put some pointers in there tomorrow. Makes editing way easier and clear than the Fimfiction comment section :twilightsmile:

I still like gabby more than Gilda.

Heh, gotta say: apart from some sentence structure, grammar, and word choice, the story concept is rock solid and you nailed the characters themselves perfectly in my opinion. ^-^

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Thanks! I’m still learning how to write, so forgive me if the structure of story seems childish

Shoutouts to gabby and that griffon.

Why isn't there a sad tag?

I'll be fine on my own.

Not true

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I’m not sure if that tag would be appropriate? Is it really that sad?

He turned around, reminded that Gabby wasn’t with him this time. His feathered ears drooped. Gabby was fun to talk to. Talkative and funny, now in her place was empty silence along with distant griffon bickering. He looked up to the sky, seeing a pale orange streak across the blue. It was nearing sunset, he better get to shelter soon.

Aww, he misses gabby.

I didn’t know gabby was blue and gray. Also, who’s Gavin?

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Wait where did p it say Gabby was blue and grey?

Also Gavin is that young griffon that we saw in that one hearths warming episode with the student six , in Gallus’s flashback

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Oh wait, I think I accidentally read it wrong it says “blue and gray feathers collide.” I thought it said “someone with blue or gray feathers.” My bad.

Now I don’t know how to feel about Grandpa Gruff.

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Honestly this was harder to write, so I have no idea how well I did at Grandpa Gruff’s personality

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On one hand I see him as someone that’s conflicted with his emotions, but on the other hand I see him as that old person that hates the younger generation.

Something tells me the next day they’re gonna forget about this.

Interesting story. Added to my read list.

Maybe it’s the fabric , Gallus thought. The soft pink blanket that laid across his back felt warm and comforting. I hope whoever this belongs to doesn’t mind if someone kept it.

Pinkie?

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