Hello everypony im yoshifan My favorite character is Yoshi obviously lol but i do like my little pony friendship is magic and zootopia super smash bros Pokémon ( 33 ) ( male ) ( straight )
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Gallus felt like he wanted to make friends but doesn't know how and feeling that he never give back. And this is before season 8 came around.
This is basically a sort inspiration of young Sheldon story s2e22 but a very short story and probably my only one time story.
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Aw, that was pretty nice. I'm glad you were able to publish your first story :)
Not bad of your first story man and I would imagine gallus would felt like that but knowing in the future he will meet his future friends Nice job
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Thanks guys I really appreciate it. it was a long wait but it was worth it 😊
nice one yoshifan! keep up the good work 💙
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Thank you I really appreciate that
Interesting Story I love it!
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Thanks
The story needs work, but it's your first so I understand that. Nice job with it, great topic and song choice, and writing errors did not make the story too much of a tough time to read. I like the Gallus backstory premise. Good luck if you are going to write more stories, and the app called Grammarly should help for this and any future stories. :) Cool story!
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Thanks for the advice and your input on my story I really appreciate that and maybe I'll consider it if I ever make a story
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You're welcome. :)
This would make a really great episode! The episode was playing out in my mind the whole time I was reading this!
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Thanks when I saw the episode I thought this would be an interesting way how he will go through in his younger years before meeting up with his friends in the future but he never thought he will become friends with them
This was a good story. I especially enjoyed the end where we saw what each of his future friends were doing back then. There were a lot of problems with sentence structure (especially run-on sentences), but they didn't subtract from the story itself, so it was still very enjoyable! Altogether, this was good work, especially for your first time.
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Thanks I really appreciate it I've been wanted to try something like that for a while and yeah despite that I'm not the greatest writer I did my best tried to put in where the periods are and some of the sentence as well so it's not all over the place but again thank you so much for that
Ha ha, nice comedy
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What do you mean comedy I didn't make anything funny
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Oh, how is really sad. I mean not story
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If you look at the summary of the story it's basically talking about his past gallus been going through hard aches ok
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Meh, was reading. it's a little funny when they randomly give examples of an error ›
Scope Insensitivity (lesswrong)
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Fine I maybe not be a great writer but I wanted to do something different on my social media for a while and I did it despite that there are few things that are missing I was proud of it and if you didn't like it that's fine everybody has their opinion as long as it's not too cruel or anything like that
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my god, open your eyes or learn to read. Where did I say I didn't like it? my first comment is literally praise (albeit not what was expected)
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Ohhh... my mistake
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yes
I love how you use music like this. (You might want to say the name of the song in the story in case the youtube video gets taken down and people can find another video of the song)
Gabby was right. Gallus got a lotta friends and that's quite nice. Take that Grandpa Gruff. I love how all of them were doing things, including Silverstream looking at the moon for the future.
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Thanks i really appreciate it Oh yeah I did put the name of the music on my Author's Note and thanks I've been wanted to do something like that for a long time when I first started signing up on this website
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Troll dude