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I love this!!!
There are a few minors misspells and the pacing is a bit to fast, other than that, I really it!! Especially with TwiSpike fics where she gets preggers at the end Thank you!!!
Also, is really interesting that you gave us a different perspective or a twist of an old cliche story. What if the Dragon was not keeping the Princess captive in the castle but protecting her from others trying to get her but the Dragon ended up falling for her.
More,
... For some reason, I loved that scene at the end.
*upon finishing reading this story*
i love it i want more part 2
One word....
WOW!!!!
Please bring out a chapter 2.
I love this :)
Sorry, this is such a mess
This is a complete mess.
But it's perfect mess.
hahahaha
I was laughing the whole time. It was amazing
It was just the sort of random I needed right now.
The story idea is very good. But the execution is very messy.
Multiple spelling and grammar errors and a story that moves at break neck speed.
It's got a lot of potential but it needs an editor to clean it up. I strongly suggest getting an editor before doing chapter 2. if you want I'd be happy to volunteer. I've edited a few stories for others before.
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If it gets worse I'll consider it but thanks though. Trying the best I can.
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Understood. Good luck.
Make a part 2 this will make it hit big with a Kirin child
Romantic indeed.
Loved the bit of seeing Luna having some fun time too in the end.
Wonder if we will see a sequel on what will Celestia do there.