What are fillies made of? Sugar! Spice! And everything nice of course! Take yourself on an adventure where the fillies have a special mission.
Adventurous Story
All the main characters, are fillies?
They can't back down from the mission they've taken!
Short, sweet, and to the next mission!
They could also be a lot spicier than you think they could be..... (laughs in the backround)
As you might have noticed, I've changed the goal to be 20 likes instead of 50. I thought 50 likes might have been too much. So let's try to get 20 likes for the next story of the sequel! Tell your friends, or the people who you follow online, to come and like it! Leave a comment after I blow my bazooka! -BOOM-
(laughs crazily in the backround)
(coughs a little)
If anyone would like to share comments, good and bad, don't worry! I'll take critism lightly.
Hope you liked my story!
Tell your friends if you wish!
Glargh! You've used the picture in my group!
adorable.
some of thhe mane 6 were a bit out of charracter sometimes, but it wasn't much.
overall: DAW!!!! cuteness overload
Anypony who could say that the mane 6 are not adorable as fillies, is incorrect
Overall, a great story with a quite original plot. Never would have imagined them getting up to these antics as fillies.
I give a favourite my good sir.
first off..DAWWWWWW second off well done very well done
this one was about as hard for me to read as it is to read anything so by that i can tell you changed styles a bit...good that means it will be easier for others to read
third ...(i am totally not jealous..okay maybe a tinnie tiny bit) you have more likes than stormclouds and still no dislikes good..very good and more views again very good.that means that your fic wont wither and die and become stagnant like all mine have. welp i am off to the second chapter
chapter 2....love it its a little harder for me to read but thats okay because if its hard for me to read that means its easy for others to read
carry on i see great things in the future of this fic
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Thanks so much you guys! I'm really glad that you liked it!
This was my second story, and wow, 10 likes already? Thanks!
Love you guys very much!
910468
OMG!!! I checked that I DID use the picture in your group! I didn't own the picture at all, I was just randomly searching it online!
What a weird coincedence!
I'm so sorry! Anyways, I'll try to change the picture, to make you feel bettah!
913788 No no! it's fine haha.
I don't own it either. Who cares if there's the same picture on a story and in a group?
IMPORTANT MESSAGE
For some of you ponies, fillies, and even bronies who read this, this story might seem like it's over. Not quite yet. You might wonder why Derp/Ditzy isn't in this story yet. Wait until the end, ponies!!!!!!! I ain't done yet!!!!
P.S.
I like scaring people.
nice nicely done
918735
Thank you! Wow, you read fast!
I liked the ending myself and laughed a bit!
bad for what?
919451
Wait... what?
>:D y can i not like more than once the suspense might just metaphorically kill me.
921838
Lol I appreciate that you want to like it again even though you can't.
Thanks anyway!
935907 awesome yeah 50 likes is a little high even for a successful first timer like you my goal is 10 likes for stormclouds and 12 for chimera and even then that's WAY out of reach for me
936077
Well, I thought you were pretty successful on your stories!
Don't give up! I really wanna hear more of them!
Damn you. I look forward to the sequel greatly.
1039986
Haha! Thanks for the support!
:D This chapter has been exceedingly cute. Well done!
1322914
Thank you good sir.
HAZAH! 20 LIKES AND HERE WE GO!
Onward to the next story: Derpy's Muffins
buuuut rainbow dash doesn't have a parent
>>rainbowdashlove okay no offense but im wait my but off. can you please hurry
Awesomest story ever!
I loved this story