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WhispersInTheDark
"Cathredral bells struck by lightning, and in the clamour, hear their name." — Aragon
WhispersInTheDark
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While a part of me is frustrated that the actual sex happens off screen what you have with Sweetie's teasing and flirting is very entertaining.
Very nice, short but not so much so that it leaves me angry about it. Have a thumb
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Fixed, and thank you!
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Thank you so much! I just expanded the sex scene, so I hope it's better!
Hmmm, people we’ve been blueballed. I won’t hound you too hard since this is only your fourth story, but it wasn’t that bad for an introduction to writing sauce.
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Thanks for that. I DID expand the sex scene, so you probably read it before I revised it. This should be more satisfying.
It's short, but nicely done. The best writings with sex in them tend to have longer lengths (flesh out the characters, the setting, their reasons for having sex, etc.), but given that is only your fourth story I'd say it passes.
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I appreciate that, and I am learning, Hopefully, I'll get better.
I've always preferred my clop with a bit more substance, but this was still quite well done.
Short and sexy.
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Thank you. I didn't want to go into too much detail; I just wanted a brief, sexy interaction between the two characters.
Short, sexy, and sweet
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Damn! There goes my fetish fuel. Oh well, I guess I could just pretend I didn't read that part.
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So Sweetie getting pregnant is your fetish? Interesting...
Concordo muito interessante mas você poderia colocar um pouquinho mais que nem um ou três meses para confirmar que a suite belle está mesmo grávida do filho ou filha do Big Mac, ele a pesa em casamento para cuidar dela e do bebê
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Eu teria, mas eu só queria uma pequena história divertida que fosse curta
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Eu sei disso é só uma mania minha que eu tenho mas é sério eu gostei bastante da seu fanfic
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Obrigado! Foi divertido escrever e agradeço a sua contribuição!
I look forward to reading more of your stories.
BADASSITUDE!!!