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Steel Quill
A pony with too much time on his hooves and too much plot to work with, in more ways than one. Porn Pope (TM). Also on FA!
Steel Quill
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Nicely done.
Sunny does have a mighty fine iteration of Applejack.
7243451 Sunny draws the booteh rite. They don't call it an 'Apple Bottom' for nothin'!
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Thank you both for reading! I love Sunny's work. Did anything in particular catch your attention in the story?
That ass and thighs.
That coverart looks grotesque.
7243973 to each their own, I suppose.
That's...one hell of an ass.
7244478 It's one worth writing about for sure
I have two stories based on his artwork that I haven't completed, Reading yours inspires me to finish them in the near future.
Great read.
7244913 Thank you for taking the time to read mine. By all means, go for doing some yourself.
Did anything stand out in the story for you?
Dat ass...
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Lord have mercy.
Point about trying to write the drawl: it's "y'all" as in "you all." "Ya'll" is the equivalent of "you'll," as in "you will." Also, "Y'all" is plural. So if Mac talked about AJ with her friends or included Apple Bloom, it would be "Y'all," but as it is simply the two of them talking to and about each other it's still you (or "ya" if you want to try and keep the accent, but that seems like overdoing it).
7244952 "beach balls stuffed in those jeans", captured his artwork perfectly
7243872 There wasn't a whole lot of corruption in this story. What I mean is that one of the siblings somehow learns about incest, either through a news article about it, or through talking to one of their friends and their initial reaction of disgust and nausea, but then they start thinking about it, about why someone would actually want to have carnal relations with a blood relative, or even roleplay about it. Then, because it is a sexual taboo, they start to get turned on by the incest fetish. Then he/ she broaches the topic of incest to their sibling, who react as they initially did. Then through frank discussions about incest, flirting, rubbing, and teasing; they start to crumble their siblings aversion to the incest fetish. Maybe starting off with some groping and heavy petting, then moving onto oral, then graduating into intercourse, before moving onto explore other fetishes such as anal, bondage, domination and submission, pet play, etc.
I understand that there are stuff that isn't shown, or for that matter how long they have been fornicating with each other. But it is a story element which was neglected in this story. But that is my thought on the story.
Why roam when you can get some at home?
That was pleasant. Good job.