While a part of me is frustrated that the actual sex happens off screen what you have with Sweetie's teasing and flirting is very entertaining.

Very nice, short but not so much so that it leaves me angry about it. Have a thumb

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Fixed, and thank you!

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Thank you so much! I just expanded the sex scene, so I hope it's better!

Hmmm, people we’ve been blueballed. I won’t hound you too hard since this is only your fourth story, but it wasn’t that bad for an introduction to writing sauce.

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Thanks for that. I DID expand the sex scene, so you probably read it before I revised it. This should be more satisfying.

It's short, but nicely done. The best writings with sex in them tend to have longer lengths (flesh out the characters, the setting, their reasons for having sex, etc.), but given that is only your fourth story I'd say it passes.

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I appreciate that, and I am learning, Hopefully, I'll get better.

I've always preferred my clop with a bit more substance, but this was still quite well done.

Short and sexy.

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Thank you. I didn't want to go into too much detail; I just wanted a brief, sexy interaction between the two characters.

Short, sexy, and sweet!

She smiled. “I’m taking birth control. We’re fine.”

Damn! There goes my fetish fuel. Oh well, I guess I could just pretend I didn't read that part.