A German who likes history, and WW2 technology but not war. "Within the darkness there is light and hope"
The Pacific, 1945. The Second World war in the Pacific comes close to an end. But still Japan won't give up. Their soldiers rather fight to the end then getting captured. It's their honor. One Japanese squad however sees it as honor to keep a lost foal named Tootsie Flute alive.
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Like it so far. Your knowledge of Japanese military conduct is impressive.
Just a few things.
Is there a word missing here?
I wouldn't have him say this. However odd Tootsie looked to them, he'd still probably assume she was from earth.
Go for something a little less spontaneous. Like she starts describing her mother, slowly realises how much she misses her and then breaks down.
I'd call him Dry Ice. Cold and biting.
Wait, what?!
This colt opened a portal to another dimension?!
Who is this kid?!
Thanks for the advice, much apprehiated! The colt, foals can't Control teleport Magic, it's unpredictable. What word is missing here?
Well......
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He predicted the Future Without Knowing it.
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Well, it's just that 'In fact, lost' doesn't quite make sense.
What was lost? How was it lost?
Also, if he couldn't control the trans-dimensional magic, he sounded like he could if he said he was sending her to the human world.
I'm just saying trans-dimensional magic would be an advanced skill to say the least. So far in the series, only Discord and Starlight Glimmer have that power and the latter only through stealing magical knowledge.
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I see what you mean. What I meaned was that the war is lost. About the colt, it was just a normal teleport spell, you remember the safe-fail I told you about?
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I see.
So none of them question what the hell it is?
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I couldn't think of anything better back then.
More struggle at iwo jima. This will not end well.
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Yes, after all, it was one of the bloodist battles and the only one where the US had more casulties then Japan
Hey, I know you! You follow redsopine! Anyways, not why I'm here. Nice work on this story, I love these types of stories :3
Liked, btw
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Yes i do and Thank you. Glad to hear that you like it.
Did this happen in real life?
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Yes it did
"will we free her" should be we will free her. Great chapter overall
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Thank you very much, apprehiated!
Sweetie drops
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Nice. I Hope it deosn Shock you too much with what happened to tootsie
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Nope. It doesn't. War is harsh...so it is kind of expected?
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Indirectly. I Wanted a Shocking Scene
I like this scene the feels are Real
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My goal exactly. I Doubt you would have expected about James Secret didn't you?
You need to rearrange the words at end.
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Okay, Thanks! Hope you liked this chapter
But will Tootsie ever go home?
Yay! The war is over. (for now at least) *hint hint* Korean war
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Find out in the Last chapter
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Yes, for Now
Pretty decent.
I'd still have some of the characters treat the introduction of a talking, brightly-coloured foal as a bit of a weird circumstance.
This needs detail. Death needs detail or it doesn't register.
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Yes, I will think of something. I thought Kuribayashi would see it with honor and Nishi due his horse would love Tootsie
Uh, nowadays this always sounds questionable, like some cult leader or drug dealer.
I'd just have him say 'I'm here to tend to your injuries.
Ugh! There goes Tootsie's sleep for the next few nights.
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I see. THat Line is actually said by the Medic Enemy in Payday 2, I thought it would suit to calm Tootsie down.
I...wouldn't say that.
It was pretty much one of the main things that the USA held onto in their war against Japan.
Hell, it was what brought them into the war in the first place.
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What James meant to say that he doesn't look back anymore but forward.
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Ah fair enough.
Might want to add to that.
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I will do when I have the time
I like how you play. I use the same tactics.
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Indeed. I prefer Bolt-action rifles over MLGs and SMG, as such, I used the Arisaka and K98. When it came to close combat, I was always stuck between the MP40 and MP44, while in MW, I prefer the AK-47. How do you like how I putted Miller, Polonsky and Roebuck in?
Well, this is quite an interesting start! Save for a few grammar and punctuation errors, it's quite well-written! I imagine Flute could end up being discovered at some point, which wouldn't be good!
I hope Colt Ice gets dealt with at some point!
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Oh, he will, I can garantee you that, glad you like it so far.
At least the others were accepting of Flute. I really felt bad for her with the horror she had to endure on the battlefield, but at least Sato cares enough to protect her life! However, that cliffhanger has me worried...
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Well, you should know how fast the marines gained the upper side. Do you like the soundtrack I putted in?
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Oh, yes! I think it was an excellent selection of tracks!
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Glad to hear it.
It's a real shame that Tom died... but he knew the risks that come with war, so he died with honor. I hope Flute doesn't end up getting scorched! I just hate seeing ponies, especially fillies, getting hurt!
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Me too but sadly, it can’t be always avoided.
Well, if there's one thing Flute is a natural at, it's cheating death! But at least she's okay! I'm surprised none of the Marines were questioning why there would be a pastel-colored cartoonish pony in their world... but I'm sure there are more pressing matters at hand!
Yeah, I would've read this sooner... but I've been way too caught up with studying for final exams. I'll keep at it, though!
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They dismiss it due being at war. And Good Luck with your Exam!