Berlin 1945. The war is lost. Josef Becker, a young man at the age of 20, finds a lost child, or more exactly, a filly named Diamond Tiara. Can he protect her from the advancing reds?
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Bronycommander
A German who likes history, and WW2 technology but not war. "Within the darkness there is light and hope"
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I like it now some things stood out to me
love that quote other than that I had a wonderful read lol thank u keep it up
7664381 I will. What i meant with that was that he is dead but the body is still recognizable, also not burned or destroyed. By the way, do you like the soundtrack of the game? I do as it fits the battle of Berlin perfectly.
I loved the sound track ur right it does lol I can imagine that
Interesting story. However I would like to point out that there are quite a bit of typos, but those can easily be fixed. Also I advise that you don't rush the story telling, this may result in longer chapters and will be worth the while. Great work so far!
7664465 Thanks for the advice.
7664419 If you like it, why you don't add it to tracking or your favorites?
Cause I haven't got around to it sorry lol
7664482 Don't be, I was just wondering
What is this a crossover of?
7665802 sniper elite v2
Is good.
7667799 I read that in Heavy's voice, thank you!
Good as usual. :)
7673013 Thank you again!
A few grammatical errors but all and all like he before me great chapter
I liked it lol actually it's sad to imagine but Russia was that cruel after Stalingrad and before but I can't really blame them. The great patriotic war as it's known in Russia and they have a museum in Kiev Ukraine. But great work I love the character development lol
Reminds me of heroes and generals.
7675988 glad to hear it, it's a great game
7675857 can you point them out?
7675916 That’s how the Russians were deployed in cod waw. Thought it would fit. And Tabun, That’s wolff s plan with the Russians in the game and you have to stop it.
I remember it lol did u ever play call of duty finest hour?
7677422 nah,cod waw was my first cod game
Finest hour got me into WW2 in the first place lol I love the Stalingrad chapter's makes you feel hopeless and gives you a background of ur character u were playing. This chapter was nice and katuskas were amazingly terrifying lol onward to the next one lol
7677486 that's right,like the German nebelwerfer.
The music i took from the game fits perfectly,don't you agree? so epic
I do it blends nicely and helps understand the atmosphere of the story for that moment lol
Dang..... No Josef noooooooooo ...... Doooooooooooomed.......
On a less sad note I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one. I noticed a couple of mistakes but they are in consciencal (cough cough) notice my bad spelling lol. Keep it up ?
7678487 I will, right now I work at the WW1 fic. I have a little problem with it , I explain it in the mail i will send for proofreading, okay?
Ok lol I'll help anyway I can
No this is war lol hmm stuff just was thrown down lol I didn't notice any mistakes good job
moustache for your efforts
Good stuff.
7683731 Thanks!
Great story overall, a few minor issues but they can be overlooked, but seriously great story!
7686964 Thank you, does the music for for the dance or do you know a more fitting musuc?
Uhhhhhh.... did death take a day off for a bit or something?
7667836 I thought the sniper was American? or at least allied? why is he stopping the red army? and why do the Germans say Comrade?
Well, your not alone, Most snipers use a bolt-action even now, as it is much more accurate than a semi-auto, less moving parts to mess up the shot.
7694846 What I meant was that he died but the body was not destroyed in the explosion
7694858 Well, in the game, the sniper has the task to eliminate all remaining scientiests in the city that want to deflect to the russians and help those who want to deflect to the Americans, that's why he fights Germans and Russians alike. Karl is American but the son of a U.S. ambassador to Germany before the war broke out, so in fact he's German-American.
He wanted to safe the man who died in the Opernplatz but the Russians were heading there with tanks, so he destroyed the bridge to slow them down.
So you like the battle of Berlin
8011408 Yes, it is my favorite battle in history for some reason, can't explain why
8011412 alright,do you know there is two songs about the battle of Berlin
8011428 I know them but can't remember the names
8011458 Hearts of iron and attreo dominutus
8011589 A yes, now i remember, thanks! Hope you enjoy this story. It's a crossover of the game Sniper Elite V2
7676993 I was about to say Cod waw reference bur you beat me to it
7677499 Good chapter,poor medic also you spell katyusha wrong
Sniper elite undead army awesome!
8028120 really?
i actually took the word from a transscript from the cod waw Mission
8028104 thanks i thought it would fit the Level and Situation
8028182 it's actually Zombie army but i agree, a awesome game
8028182 oh i thought it ws was undead army
8028821 Yeah that's how you spell it