A German who likes history, and WW2 technology but not war. "Within the darkness there is light and hope"
Jessie Günther had lost everything in the war. His wife, his son and every friend he had.. In Summer 1960, he makes a walk and gets a surprise that would change his depressive live.
This is my first story, so don't go too hard on me, okay? Also grammar isn't my strong suit but I appreciate any help. If you want to do a cover art or crossover, feel free to do so. The story was inspired by my little Dashie.
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Need an editor and ponies know to much about humanity.
a little fast as well, slow it down a bit and give a more realistic reaction to the presence of Twilight.
7584957 Thanks for the tip, do you know wher I can find one? And about humanity, it will be explained in the later chapters
7585510 I will do my best, the reaction to Twilight I used was the most realistic I could get from my brain. Any advice how I could it make more realistic? And thanks for tracking! I really appreciate it!
7585918 my advice for a more realistic reaction to Twilight would be some shock and disbelief for the solder and a little fear and awe on Twilights part as well as curiosity.
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This group can help.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors
Just be aware that you are missing culture shock.
7586469 Thanks i will edit that right away
Forever 21 I would say it's a blessing but it probably be a curse if his wife and son were still alive I mean nobody wants to see ur wife and child die before you uk but that's actually tragic I feel for the character
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Ok cool well nope u already answered that well darn (kicks dirt) well at least she can dream of Nercromorphs in the future
that Sniper Elite part was good. however you should have just placed the video.
Well, Fuck, time for another Red Alert game before reading another story
PS: Speaking of Red Alert, will you have plans to create one, I am sure Equestria would join the war in the side of the Allies, wonder if Stalin is still alive in this universe
7944503 thanks do you mean the Music or what do you exactly? And which Video?
7944509 no but i planing to do a stalingrad fic, a pacific war fic and Vietnam as well as a homefront fic
This is a good and cute chapter also you made me wish i had a dreamcatcher that looked like a stuka
7982913 thank you, about the stuka, it would be possible to make but it would be a challenge to make it look like one
7983102 (clapping)Good story
7985805 thank you.
wow man, I was just looking up "My Little Dashie" with the "Gore" tag and came across one of your stories...
Now this is something i HAVE to read
8141913 the tag is for the Main character's past and a Fight in One of the chapters. Are you already through with it, as your Comment is at the Last chapter?
8141938 no not yet, currently I'm in RAGE MODE because of STUPID "My Little Dashie" RIPOFF
I'll start reading tomorrow
it's currently 1222
8141958 ok, i was just Wondering as you Commented on the Last chapter of the Story.
8142112 Another FimFiction bug lol
8143980 okay then, Hope you Enjoy the Story
oh, so he TOO gets wings and a horn? WTF!?
Was he transported to Equestria first? Or is he a POW now?
YAY! HES IN THE LUFTWAFFE AND HE HATES HITLER!! BEST NON-NAZI SOLDIER EVER!!!
Do you mean "Life"?
I have an imagination too
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8144013 No, he just can't age anymore and his able to take more punishment then a normal human. About his brother, It was very common that soldiers got torn apart from explosion, thus making them unrecognizable. Those were then reported missing. Yes, he never believed in the Führer, all main characters in my WW2 stories do, to show that not every German was a nazi, know what I mean? What's up with the picture, I can't see anything.
No pants? LOL
"Bi-Bi, Bitte tu mir nicht weh."
Because there's no Comma, it says that he forgot his name and what people usually call him LOL
Weeding? dang, yard work in such a beautiful story? WHAT WERE YOU THINKING!? XD LOL
8144034 He wears pants, I just didn't thought of writing it back then. Commas are my weakness, so thanks for pointing that out, I take any help I can get to improve my stories. For Twilight speaking German, the rules say the stories must be in English, that's way I wrote it like this. Plus my non-german speakung readers can understand what she is saying. The third picture shows James's weeding with his wife, so what do you mean with yard work, you confuse me.
8144058 Wedding, not Weeding lol
8144063 Oh, right, i will change that right away.
The Divebomber?
(EDIT)
Ah, its IS the Super Divebomber
...
but which one? The one Armed with Twelve 12.7mm Machine Guns and Two 37mm Cannons? Seems lit
"HEY IS THAT A UNICORN?!", a little girl asks
"No, it's my daughter in a costume", You respond
"CAN I BE FRIENDS WITH HER!?", the little girl asks
"Shit", you say
"I'm doing good", Name sez
NOOOO YOU IDIOT! THEYLL FIND OUT It's NOT A COSTUME!!
You know, This guy treats Twilight Better than the Guy that treated Rainbow Dash... In, my opinion of course
JA! Germany TOTALY Would've won the war if the Russians hadn't robbed Germany of their Tanks
O____O ...
O____O
TIGER DIED IN THE BOMBING!?
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
O_______O
He speaks the language of one of the world's biggest threats?
YOU GET MONEY!?
Ima excellent Marksmen... For TANKS Of Course
The part where the Bullies come in:
GO AWAY! BEAT IT! DONT ANGER A WWII VETERAN! YOU KNOW THATS A BAD IDEA!! SCRAM! LEAVE BEFORE I BRING OUT MY Sturmpanzer II, AND BLAST YOU TO PIECES!! GOOOOO AWAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!
REKT!
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Those Soviet Basterds
"My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic", is comin 2 town boi
Just Like My Little Dashie...
Isn't Twilight STILL Dirty? and doesn't she still have that uncleaned cut? You never mentioned a part where she gets cleaned and bandaged
O__________O
Oh sweet Luna Please Help This Poor Filly
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It's hard to imagine HUMAN CHILDREN doing that
I bet the Other People in the Neigh-Borhood are all like: "THE NAZIS HAVE RETURNED! RUN 4 UR LIVES!!!!"
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