Found all alone as an orphan in the Everfree forest, Shadow Dawn has been living with the royal sisters, princess Celestia and princess Luna for all he can remember of his life. To most ponies that would be heaven, to Shadow it was hell. Being an alicorn might have it's ups, but certainly it has many downs acording to him.
The royal sisters and the staff were nice to him, but it's more of the part of 'being a prince' he hated. He had been annoyed, angry and even to the point where all he felt was rage flowing through his veins.
Shadow Dawn doesn't know any of his past, not even his parents or where he's from. All he knows is that he was found in the Everfree forest as a lost little alicorn orphan.
Chapters (2)
If Shadow Dawn was voiced, what would he sound like?
Good work!
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A little higher pitched comepared to ponies like Shining armor.
More pls
I want to keep reading but you need space between when characters talk or at least don’t mix it up where I don’t know who is really talking at all... There is to much to point to though it reads really good and seems promising enough that I’ll see how this goes.
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What do you mean by " space between when characters talk" exactly? if you could do an example I'd be thankful.
Are you ever gonna update this?
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I'd love to update this story, don't get me wrong. The reason why I haven't updated is that there's been a lot of things I need to take into priority first. Getting a job, bills that sort of thing. So I'm sorry for not updating anything for a long time, but gotta take care of my life first.
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Ok, understood