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Bad things happen, and sometimes bad things happen to very good ponies, Pound and Pumpkin Cake know this very well. When they were only three years old they lost their auntie Pinkie Pie. There lives were never the same until a pink mare arrives on their sixteenth birthday and gives them a gift they could only dream of. One last day with auntie Pinkie.
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Not bad but this feels kind of short, and it also feels like it cuts off at the end.
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That's kinda what I was aim for with the ending.
8245179 You mean it was intentional to leave it like that?
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I did add a couple more words to the ending but yes it's suppose to be like that.
8245913 Huh, I'm fine with not seeing the entire day, but the way it's written just feels like a sudden cut-off. Also, I would've liked a sentence or two explaining just how Pinkie died.
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She fell busted her head it's in the first half of the story.
8246320 Just like that? I mean, not for nothing, but Pinkie has fallen from great heights and hurt her head before.
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true but that's from a cannon source and those were all summed up as prat falls. Fake for the point of laughter, and she was always in control I point to when she slowly fell into the lake as not to disturb Rainbow Dash. This was well bloody and messy, to keep things still in the E category.
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Hello! Have a review. I like the setup here, and there are some fun lines ("Standard fees for sinning still apply" was great). And Pinkie taking a Pinkie Promise really seriously is spot on. On the down side, "celebrity pull" is a weird reason for Pinkie to get her day. She was a Bearer, and that's not primarily a celebrity thing at all. The fic could do with a proofread, too. So I guess overall a fic with slightly more potential than it actually shows.
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This is an old one, but thank you for taking the time to write. I'm glad you appreciated it enough to write the critique. Merci Beaucoup.
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Yeah, fair comment that it's an old fic. You're welcome, of course. I don't claim to be the world's greatest reviewer, but I am always honest about what I think. I'm sure you enjoy writing ponyfic (you wouldn't write 87 fics and counting if you didn't) and in the end that's the most important thing of all.