8169354 Also, if any artist are reading this and would like to contribute to the story, I'd really like a different piece of cover art for it. Luna's not even going to shower up for a while, sadly, and I'm already using this picture for my profile. If you'd like to help, pm me and we can talk details.

8169354 congrats on getting married

8169406 Thanks!

For some reason, the thing that bothers me the most about this chapter is that the canon fillies are in high school in this fic... I have no idea why.

I can't wait to see what you do with Big Mac in future chapters.

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8169530 Twelfth grade is when most human kids are 17-18. They're basically just on the cusp of graduating.

8169616 Wouldn't mind what?

8169935 About the gay one off chapter i guess.

8169927 Yeah, I'm aware of that.
I always thought that, in series at least, the fillies were between 10 and 12...
And I don't think there was any indication in previous chapters that this took place in the future, which is what I think bugs me the most about this.

8170034 Well there are rules on the site. Unfortunately I'm not allowed to write pedophilia on here. So I had to age them up in order to write the smut.

8170224

Unfortunately I'm not allowed to write pedophilia on here

Oh yeah...
I think I read somewhere that, for some reason, underaged anthro clop is not allowed.

8170236 Pretty sure there are laws against even fictional pedophilia.

8170262 Yeah, probably.

So many favorites. Thanks everyone!

8174192 your welcome. Its a good read

8170262 It's technically ambiguous, in a lot of cases, if the last time I bothered to check is correct. That said, a lot of sites/people would much rather play it safe, because even if not explicitly illegal, it's the sort of thing that very well could be targeted... hence the no non-aged up human CMC rule, haha.

Still loving this and glad you included the CMC, though, age up and all!

Alright, I'm done marrying my horse so I'll be working on this story more. Next chapter will be finished soon. Sorry for the wait.

"And I'm sure he'll make you another one. Just hand over the tiara. You don't want Applebloom to think you're greedy do you?" He was surprised that the girl could fight back his spell even for just a moment, but figured it was natural that hypnosis would have a hard time fighting off greed that was ingrained in the girl since birth.

That was really nasty of him. It obviously means that the tiara holds a lot of sentimental value for DT.

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That's where you draw the line?