A stranger with a spell that makes his actions seems reasonable and acceptable to anyone affected arrives in Ponyville, and immediately sets about making all of Equestria accept his lewd acts as something completely normal.
8163204 I wouldn't say rip off. Inspired by certainly, it's quite a nice concept with only two stories involving it as far as I know. The mind control only affects a character who is under the spell, not everyone in the whole world instantly. The spell has to be cast through eye contact and a particularly strong willed pony has to have their resolve weakened. The end goal is Universal Acceptance, not the starting point.
She got to see her lifelong idol on her knees kissing Fluttershy's hooves, which was truly inspiring, and she got to meet Mr. Sky
At the time of making this comment, I haven't read the next chapter in full yet, but I kind of hope that means we eventually get to see Scoots either dominating RD (maybe as part of a foursome) or dominating the other two members of the CMC.
This would be a case of show-don't-tell. You tell that Night wanted conversation and adjusted his commands, but we don't actually see that happening. I'd like to see the moments between the sexcepades with Night exploring just what it means that he's in this kind of relationship.
8163204 I wouldn't say rip off. Inspired by certainly, it's quite a nice concept with only two stories involving it as far as I know. The mind control only affects a character who is under the spell, not everyone in the whole world instantly. The spell has to be cast through eye contact and a particularly strong willed pony has to have their resolve weakened. The end goal is Universal Acceptance, not the starting point.
neato
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hell, i ripped off the idea from elsewhere anyway. went in my own direction with it, obviously
8163597 I liked your story, but most of my inspiration came from a CHYOA story called The Choice. Perhaps that was where you got your idea as well?
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bingo
At the time of making this comment, I haven't read the next chapter in full yet, but I kind of hope that means we eventually get to see Scoots either dominating RD (maybe as part of a foursome) or dominating the other two members of the CMC.
This would be a case of show-don't-tell. You tell that Night wanted conversation and adjusted his commands, but we don't actually see that happening. I'd like to see the moments between the sexcepades with Night exploring just what it means that he's in this kind of relationship.