Shining Armor is a young adult and taking an interest in mares. A certain mare very close to him can help him in a very special way. Incest. Clop in every chapter.
Yeah, no kidding, imagine how terrifying it is writing this and being fully aware that I can fuck it up at any moment. Just ask Sparky about how much I labor damn neareverything to death with him thrice over before laying down even a single sentence on a chapter. I've never worked this hard on any writing project before ever. I'm really excited about how it's going, but I'm terrified of botching it, especially after having come so far.
I think you'll be pleasantly surprised by the ultimate outcome. I swear this story will not have a downer ending, no matter how bad things may seem. As for exact shipping? Wait and see.
She's still pretty young and growing into the role. She won't handle it quite like older Cadance would. Younger Cadance is, how shall I say it? Less professional, more volatile.
8902478 I have worked with Sparky and a few story now and i have watch him (so to speak) labor over the smallest part in a chapter just knowing it is going to change a hole story. i really do feel for you SIR i do know the struggle you are facing and i wish you the best of luck. but i also know you have a good team helping you with this.
Thanks, Harts, I won't let you down, I got some great people on this team. Say, could you do me a big favor and give me some feedback on the teaser I posted in a blog? The chapter is nearing completion and feedback is never a bad thing. Thanks! :)
I really love the story behind this and that it's not just a straight up porno. Yeah I know you tagged Porn for this story, but the fact that there's an actual plot behind it is great. I like seeing Cadance as somewhat of a relationship counselor, much better than her just being Shining's wife on the show.
As little as Night Light has appeared in the story, I honestly do want things between he and Velvet to work out because I do feel that love between them even if their sex life isn't as spicy as they'd like it to be. And I really appreciate how you don't have Night Light dead or just so boring to Velvet that lack of a spicy sex life causes their marriage to implode; I hate that. I do feel that both of them wish Night Light could be home more often and I hope that can get worked out with Night's job.
Also, I hope you do get to make it BronyCon this year! It would be nice to (hopefully) bump into a fellow author. Anyway, my rambling is over and I can't wait to see how things turn out in the next chapter!
had it really been worth fucking them up like that?
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One the bulk of the meal was eaten, they had gotten to drinking.
Well we've gone from Cadance feeling OOC to... eh, I don't want to say cliche, since I've had her in the sex-therapist love-expert role myself, but... okay, I guess cliche still works. But I'm still excited to see where this goes. Velvet has a lot to answer for.
She fell backwards onto the bed, looking up at him. "Let's do it. Let's get room service."
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Come and get it!
As expected from the Princess of Love, she is a great counsel on relationship.
this is going to be good or total cluster fuck only time will tell.
love the chapter.
Ship Shining with the three, arguably four.
Cadence and Shining is definitely a good pair in the representation here.
Poppy is a definitely exotic one now and it would be very lovely to see how Shining can with a Guardpony
Velour is completely okay with Shining, no problem there.
The three ladies would fit right in as Shining dates all three.
Cannot wait to see the outcome. Voting onto Shining and the three~
Interesting developments.
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Yeah, no kidding, imagine how terrifying it is writing this and being fully aware that I can fuck it up at any moment. Just ask Sparky about how much I labor damn neareverything to death with him thrice over before laying down even a single sentence on a chapter. I've never worked this hard on any writing project before ever. I'm really excited about how it's going, but I'm terrified of botching it, especially after having come so far.
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Thanks, Crier, got it.
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I think you'll be pleasantly surprised by the ultimate outcome. I swear this story will not have a downer ending, no matter how bad things may seem. As for exact shipping? Wait and see.
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She's still pretty young and growing into the role. She won't handle it quite like older Cadance would. Younger Cadance is, how shall I say it? Less professional, more volatile.
8902478
I have worked with Sparky and a few story now and i have watch him (so to speak) labor over the smallest part in a chapter just knowing it is going to change a hole story.
i really do feel for you SIR i do know the struggle you are facing and i wish you the best of luck.
but i also know you have a good team helping you with this.
Harts Fire
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Thanks, Harts, I won't let you down, I got some great people on this team.
Say, could you do me a big favor and give me some feedback on the teaser I posted in a blog? The chapter is nearing completion and feedback is never a bad thing. Thanks! :)
I really love the story behind this and that it's not just a straight up porno. Yeah I know you tagged Porn for this story, but the fact that there's an actual plot behind it is great. I like seeing Cadance as somewhat of a relationship counselor, much better than her just being Shining's wife on the show.
As little as Night Light has appeared in the story, I honestly do want things between he and Velvet to work out because I do feel that love between them even if their sex life isn't as spicy as they'd like it to be. And I really appreciate how you don't have Night Light dead or just so boring to Velvet that lack of a spicy sex life causes their marriage to implode; I hate that. I do feel that both of them wish Night Light could be home more often and I hope that can get worked out with Night's job.
Also, I hope you do get to make it BronyCon this year! It would be nice to (hopefully) bump into a fellow author. Anyway, my rambling is over and I can't wait to see how things turn out in the next chapter!
Well we've gone from Cadance feeling OOC to... eh, I don't want to say cliche, since I've had her in the sex-therapist love-expert role myself, but... okay, I guess cliche still works. But I'm still excited to see where this goes. Velvet has a lot to answer for.