Shining Armor is a young adult and taking an interest in mares. A certain mare very close to him can help him in a very special way. Incest. Clop in every chapter.
Id laugh if they found out she was pregnant with a hippogriff. Man this story makes you really wanna hate velvet ... is it bad that the wh*re part of her personality would make a better wife.
4 more chapters, I think. I'm aiming for 15 chapters. I may put in an epilogue if I can find anything. I'm doing this for pacing control so I don't wind up with a lopsided story. I originally planned on this story being just 4 chapters and maxing out in the 30K range, but then it just sorta kept growing. Who said it ever stopped being a fetish fuel story? Clop in every chapter, and with the promise of at least 2 more incest scenes before the whole thing's up. The intention was always to write a story that was roughly equal parts plot and plot.
Thank you, it is good to be back. I plan a chapter for this month. I want to wrap up this story before too much longer. Maybe I'll do a Q&A plus write a retrospective blog post after it's all over.
Velvet isn't meant to be sympathetic right now. It's a bit of writing fumble that I haven't done particularly much to make her more of a grey figure. Now about Velour... well, she isn't really a complete person and I plan to illustrate that in either the next chapter or the one after. Having Velvet be scared about pregnancy is something pretty unique to female characters and something I thought I could do to emphasize just how severe consequences could get.
When I read that in your notes today, I just had to rib ya on that. Joking aside, though, don't mind waiting as you work to get the chapters right for you. Look forward to seeing what's in store for Act 3.
Sorry. Working on making these final chapters good. Also, I've been ill with what I'm hoping isn't a burgeoning flu. M y editor has also been very busy and I won't work without him. Thank you so much for being patient.
Thank you. <Glares at Sparky>. I'll make sure future chapters get a second round of proofing. The new chapter is coming out this weekend, not gonna say when, though.
Id laugh if they found out she was pregnant with a hippogriff. Man this story makes you really wanna hate velvet ... is it bad that the wh*re part of her personality would make a better wife.
So glad to see you back and with an awesome new chapter, keep on keeping on brother
Happy to see the update and yes, it was a great chapter!
Glad to see your back
A great way to both start and end a year.
Well worth the wait. Bravo for yet another spectacular chapter in a story already chock full of spectacular.
Finally!! It's back to being written! I knew if I held out it would be
a totally amazing chapter this is going to be so interesting to see how this all plays out.
And thus begins the final chapter.
Velvet's getting her judgment soon, and I can't wait to see how it plays out.
... Didn't this used to be a fetish fuel story?
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4 more chapters, I think. I'm aiming for 15 chapters. I may put in an epilogue if I can find anything. I'm doing this for pacing control so I don't wind up with a lopsided story. I originally planned on this story being just 4 chapters and maxing out in the 30K range, but then it just sorta kept growing. Who said it ever stopped being a fetish fuel story? Clop in every chapter, and with the promise of at least 2 more incest scenes before the whole thing's up. The intention was always to write a story that was roughly equal parts plot and plot.
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Thanks, Harts.
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Like hell I'm going to not finish this story. My hope is it's done before its 2 year anniversary.
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Thanks, Crier. I made sure this chapter got a premium of polish to make up for the wait.
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I do agree.
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Thank you, it is good to be back. I plan a chapter for this month. I want to wrap up this story before too much longer. Maybe I'll do a Q&A plus write a retrospective blog post after it's all over.
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Velvet isn't meant to be sympathetic right now. It's a bit of writing fumble that I haven't done particularly much to make her more of a grey figure. Now about Velour... well, she isn't really a complete person and I plan to illustrate that in either the next chapter or the one after. Having Velvet be scared about pregnancy is something pretty unique to female characters and something I thought I could do to emphasize just how severe consequences could get.
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When I read that in your notes today, I just had to rib ya on that. Joking aside, though, don't mind waiting as you work to get the chapters right for you. Look forward to seeing what's in store for Act 3.
I'm kinda interested in seeing Shining Armor end up Sugar Swirl instead.
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Fuck. <Glares at my editor> . Good catch.
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Sorry. Working on making these final chapters good. Also, I've been ill with what I'm hoping isn't a burgeoning flu. M y editor has also been very busy and I won't work without him. Thank you so much for being patient.
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She may or may not be involved again later.
At times the writing gets a little confusing. You might wanna consider doing additional proofreading.
Besides that, it's a pretty nice fanfic that I enjoyed reading and I shall wait for new chapters patiently.
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Thank you. <Glares at Sparky>. I'll make sure future chapters get a second round of proofing. The new chapter is coming out this weekend, not gonna say when, though.