Dark spike

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There is something wrong with spike can the girls help him be for it's to late, and well rarity be able to finally see her feelings for him or well it be to late for him well fall to darkness.

Chapters (3)

Chapter 1 Prologe · 11th May 2017 · 1,293 words
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Chapter 2 who is the cloaked figure · 14th Jan 2018 · 1,116 words
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Auther notes · 21st Jul 2018 · 79 words
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Sendic

Sendic #1 · Aug 7th, 2017 · 1 · 1 · Chapter 1 Prologe ·

10/10 m8

rip4thwall

rip4thwall #2 · Aug 7th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 Prologe ·

Your spelling and grammar need a lot of work.

the ninja king

the ninja king #3 · Aug 7th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 Prologe ·

Find an editor, because someone needs to fix that spelling and grammar. Just go to the group page and search editor and you'll find groups with people that would help you edit your work.

Assy Assman

Assy Assman #4 · Aug 7th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 Prologe ·

My eyes.

Draconicus the Reaper

Draconicus the Reaper #5 · Aug 7th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 Prologe ·

interesting I cant say anything about any issues with the story because I'm also starting a story and have no room to talk or point out mistakes and I also cant see any mistakes, but I'm blind when it comes to stuff like grammar
so good story so far I look forward to more

Infamous Paradox

Infamous Paradox #6 · Jan 14th, 2018 · · · Chapter 1 Prologe ·

Am I the only one that feels like the pacing of this story feels out of whack? I mean it is everywhere! You should try to download Grammarly, it should help with some of the spelling and grammatical errors. Other than that is quite interesting I'll be keeping an eye on it.

the ninja king

the ninja king #7 · Jan 29th, 2018 · · · Chapter 2 who is the cloaked figure ·

Hm... It’s good but there are some things to might want to edit. One, when you ever talk about Spike, capitalize the s. Also when you finished your flashback put it back on the normal font.

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