All it takes is one action to change the paths of reality. All it takes is a moment of hesitation to create a catastrophe. All it takes is one single thought... to turn you over to darkness and then that darkness will begin to overwhelm you.
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I've seen a lot of stories where Sombra corrupts one of the main characters, but this one seems special. I look forward to what comes next.
First of all, this is in SERIOUS need of editing!
Now that that's out of the way, this looks very interesting and I'm curious as to how this will turn out. Obviously, Sombra is lying, but he's lying in a way that makes sense. His lies are believable and are going to affect Twilight, which can only mean trouble. Great start!
...But seriously, go through and edit the chapter before you publish it.
8140222 wait what are the edit problems this time? I sent it to my editor.
8140222 also is sombra lying? Don't assume right away
Okay apparently I have editing issues. Don't worry people I'll fix them when I have a chance.
8140230 You're not fooling me with that one, Jonah. I know Sombra's lying.
8140337 ...... Maybe he's lying maybe he isn't I like to keep people guessing, again don't assume right away Sombra's the bad guy. Besides that would be too easy
8140342 Do you really expect me to believe that Celestia and Luna are secretly evil tyrants?
Of course, there are countless fanfics just like that; but I don't think this is one of those stories... And if it is, I'll be very disappointed.
For all we know, Sombra very well could be telling the truth. With villains you never really can tell. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Oh right. If you dislike the story please tell me why instead of just leaving dislikes.
Question about the cover art, are those HORNS on Twilight's head?! was that art made for this story specifically, or did you find it somewhere?
8145194 Found it somewhere.
8145304 ah, ok. It is still a really cool pic!
I get the feeling that Sombra is using "the Obi-Wan" method, in that his words are true, but only from a certain point of view.
I have only one complaint:
THERE IN ONLY ONE CHAPTER!
more please?
Everything else is fine
Very good so far. I can't wait for more.
Oh man. These cliffhangers!
So good so far
Moar?
Will this be continued?
when can we expect the next chapter?
How much longer man We’ve been waiting for 6 years now.