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What Makes You Special

Pegasi can't fly. Unicorns can't use magic. Equestria is dying.

What will common ponyfolk do in these dark times?

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-Dragonwing-

-Dragonwing- #1 · Jul 9th, 2012 · · · Sweet Apple Acres ·

Just released today and already on Hiatus?

Puppo530

Puppo530 #2 · Jul 9th, 2012 · · · A meeting ·

Very good story. I just want to suggest to you that you put spaces in between paragraphs. Also, I have problems with the following sentence, "Her age had been getting the best of her, lately. Had been for a long time, honestly." I think it sounds weird. I think a better sentence would be, "Her age had been getting the best of her lately; honestly, it had been for a long time." Just some suggestions.

Very good story, with a concept that I haven't read before. I'm going to see where this goes.

thecanterlottimes

thecanterlottimes #3 · Jul 9th, 2012 · · · Sweet Apple Acres ·

Promising

Lilac Skies

Lilac Skies #4 · Jul 11th, 2012 · · · Sweet Apple Acres ·

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Thanks for the comment! I'll be editing and looking over the formatting again soon, and hopefully at least part of a new chapter will be in the works soon.