It's been years since Scootaloo, Applebloom, and Sweetie Belle have been close, but in a small town like Ponyville, everypony bumps shoulders all too often. Scootaloo's gown down a rebellious path, but does she really understand what she's fighting against?
Um, just released and on hiatus? What gives?
This is not as polished as most of the fics that I read, but it's still understandable. I like the backstory and character depth you've given Scootaloo...her under-developed wings a freudian excuse for her attitude perhaps?
I think this is worth keeping an eye on. And yes, any reason for the hiatus status?
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I wrote this months and months ago, and never really gave it a second look. I thought I'd toss it up here and see if anybody liked some aspect of it. I guess I could continue it sometime? More likely I would rewrite it.
Wait, father in law? I believe you're looking for step father.
If a second chapter is made I'm sure the robbery will not go well for anyone involved.