Lilac Skies
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FIRST MABY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
Extremely well written, good sir\ fair lady. The shortness of each chapter is made up for by the detail put into each one. I do hope there will be more than three chapters (One for each character). *Drops Proper English* Anyhurr, this is really good, and I would love to see more like this. Also, ignore that "first" comment. It 'taint no comment at all!
Such wonderful imagery! The discriptions were so vivid. I didn't know something so beautiful could be written in under 1000 words. This was amazing, and the ending gave me a chuckle. This will be favorited immediately.
879079 I agree. One thing I must comment on Mr./Ms./Mrs. Lilac Skies is your vocabulary. It's very well developed. Good job overall, very good job.
I got it do Luna, it has the potential for lols.
"She could hear the dull sound of a metal handle being rearranged between powerful jaws, the slosh of a liquid too vile to be something as pure as "water". No, that metallic container was an upturned bell full of concentrated villainy, heralding her doom."
Once again, you have shown an amazing usage of grammer combined with a point of view that is extremely well done. Five out of five moustaches to you.
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Thank you good sir! Flattery will get you everywhere
I think the Applebloom chapter is a little weaker, so I might be rewriting parts of it. And I won't be doing a Luna chapter until the end, sort of using the princesses as bookends. I think next up will be Dash.
Not pictured: Dash's cumulus mediocris swelling into a cumulonimbus while she dozes which then explodes into a lightning burst when one of her co-workers bucks it to wake her up.