Equestria has been saved, all the important ponies have been saved, and through all of that the changelings have been reformed. With the exception of one.
As all the ponies escaped from their cocoon prisons they all see that the battle wasn't over yet once Chrysalis emerges from the rubble of her destroyed throne. They were all getting ready for the final showdown and put an end to evil tyrant's ways, however, once she emerged they all saw that something bad has happened.
Apparently the explosion the love from all the reformed changelings has caused was too much for Chrysalis to handle and in doing so caused the former queen to develop amnesia. Absolutely no memory of anything not even her own name.
Starlight Glimmer, however, sees this as an opportunity to make a new friend and she's willing to take the risk.
the premise looks good
I think that your premise is good, really. But perhaps consider the tempo at which your story progresses, and make sure that you are not cramming too much information and story into too little of a space. Personally, I felt that was a bit rushed. Other than that, I think it has potential. I hope to see more in the future.
This is a really good story. I do suggest that you read over everything once again, to fix some little grammar errors. Other than that, this story is great. I love the concept. Good job! ~Natalie
Will Chrysalis reform into a reformed changeling in this story?
This was great
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She will be looked over by Starlight, so most likely.
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Sweet! <3
I thought this story might focus on why Chrysalis is bad and what or who caused her to turn evil in the first place?
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That will be a story for another day, when she slowly starts remembering.
Inside we both know what's been going on
We know the game and we're gonna play it
And... If you ask me how I'm feeling
Don't tell me you're too blind to see
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
Good story
I'd love to see something like this in the show.
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Good to know; Season 6 Finale barely showed her reason for hating ponies; my moneys on that Ponies are the reason for the Badlands.
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My theory is the badlands used to be the location of the city of Trot, from the comics, till Celestia nuked the changelings.
On official maps, the badlands are mostly flat, surrounded by ridges, with a single mountain in the direct center. This kind of Geography is only found in impact craters.
Sequel?
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Sorry I haven't been getting around much of anything as of late. But now that most of all of us will basically be isolated I might just use that to help me write more.
Is this really the finished story? I just have a feeling that the story ends in mid-sentence.