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Sonik


Hi! I'm just some random dude who enjoys watching ponies and then obsessing over them with my friends on the internet!

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Four days after the marriage of Shining Armor and Princess Cadence, as well as the defeat of Queen Chrysalis, Fluttershy receives a visit by Twilight. Twilight tells her that if she sees any changelings, she needs to tell her immediately, on Celestia's orders. Fluttershy, not wishing to do so, begins thinking about it, and the things she thinks of makes her anxious and uneasy. In doing so, she decides to take a walk into the Everfree Forest to calm her mind and enjoy the view. While admiring the scenery, she trips on something. Looking back, she finds something she feared having to find, for the risk of being shunned by her society-a hurt changeling. Because of the nature of Celestia's instructions, Fluttershy must make a tough decision: Whether to turn this changeling in or to bring it into her home to make it better.

The real question is will Fluttershy fall to the peer pressure of society, or will she do what her heart tells her is right?

I do not own the cover image, nor any of the characters displayed in this story (except for the changeling.)

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Chapters (22)
Comments ( 776 )

How close are you to finishing the first chapter? This sounds interesting, and I'd like to see the first chapter. No offense intended.

3870256 I just posted this story yesterday, so it'll be a few days.

I like this. It is a well written story so far and I like changelings so... win-win.

3873915 I'm glad you are enjoying!

Good plot line so far (hah, I said line), fluttershy's caring nature works brilliantly to go against peer pressure.

I think you used the word 'bed' too many times at the end though. Now I'm tired. Thanks a l-..............

3874689 Heheh...line...
Glad you liked it!
...And I'll make sure to go check out the part with too many 'beds.' Thank y-*falls on floor asleep*

Blind! Hes a blind changeling!
You just managed to have both my favourite things a character can be in one story...
can i join your swarm please?

It has a lot promise, I like it so far.

Why does fluttershy keep calling him

little one

no offence its getting a little weird :twilightsheepish:

3879709 If you wish to join my swarm, go right ahead.
We will have ALL of the fun.
It shall be...
*puts on sunglasses*
DOUBLED.
YEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH

3880107 I'm glad that you like it!

3880276 Well, she doesn't exactly know his name, or if he even has one.

Comment posted by Cassie the chosen one deleted Feb 2nd, 2014

3883949 No, because Queen Chrysalis is standing right behind you. And now you're dead.

3883971
No, because im standing behind Chrissy. i also brought my dear friend stabby- uh- pinkie pie :pinkiecrazy:

So, she got up out of her chair and took her salad into her miniscule kitchen and put it in the small refrigerator before making her way out the door of her cottage, setting off through the Everfree.

You seem to like the "word" "and", overusing it even. :derpytongue2:

For now, I like the story so far. I'll give my "definitive" through a the end of the last currently published chapter. :twilightsmile:

Good story so far!
Awaiting next chapter! :pinkiehappy:

In the last chapter it said he was blind so how can he imagine fluttershy in his dream?

I'm loving this so fat. A gem of an idea and excellent execution, too. Can't wait ' til the plot thickens. And I love the mall this story seems to be hinting, "do what you feel is right even if everyone tells you not to."

3890858 Even though he's blind, he can still imagine what she looks like. I guess I could add some detail as to what he thinks she looks like...
Yes, I have now added a description to the changeling's dream Fluttershy,

The name 'Chryssy' makes me think its a nickname for chrysalis :P

d'awwwwww haw haw haw hoho!

I thought i fav'd this before? whatever, ill keep on eye on this one.. i might not be a fan of Fluttershy, but ill give it a shot :)

Later that night, when Fluttershy was feeding him love, she once again tried to speak. Like before, his rioting within was held down. When she left; however, he finally managed to open his mouth and speak.

I think the "she" here is normally a "he". no?

Keep up the good work :derpytongue2:

Great chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter:twilightsmile:

This story is WAY better than the more popular stories on Fimfic.

Is Bumble still blind? If he is you might put a little bit more emphasis on it. just enough so we dont forget it

3911643 Oh, okay. Thanks for the feedback!

I love this. Please continue, dear sir. :moustache:

3938381 Glad you're liking it!

Aww, this is so sweet and SAD!!! :heart::fluttercry: Loving this so far!

4315438 That is the perfect picture ever. Thank you for the fav and comment!

Yay updates! Couldn't wait for the next chapter, great work!
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4316069 Yeah, sorry for the short stick there, buddy. I'll get the next one out as soon as possibru!

Wow this was really a good chapter! It helps flesh out the character development of the other changelings. Worth the wait :)

This chapter is... quite strange.
How could they chat like that, and the ponies don't be suspicious of trickery, IN THE MIDDLE OF AN INVASION? :derpyderp2:

And "play outside"? While there is tons of flying enemies?
It's a good development, but not a good situation. :twilightoops:

Like other readers point, play outside in middle of invasion... wat?

4316972 I seemed to have somehow forgotten it. I'll work on it to make the chapter better. Thank you for the criticism!
Have you got any personal ideas to help this chapter to improve?

4318225
I have no idea :pinkiecrazy:
Maybe play "inside"? :pinkiehappy:

(Sorry if I'm not helpful on that :derpytongue2:)

4318698 Perhaps I could have Tea's garden inside of a larger outside house? (Like an indoor garden?)

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