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Death smiles at us all; all a man can do is smile back.

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The doggo/dybbuk with the upside-down head from the movie The Unborn visits Fluttershy. She's frightened. Because of course she is.


A kinda-sorta-maybe crossover with the horror film The Unborn. I've never seen it, but I hear it's pretty bad.

Edited by James Fire, who is thankfully not a Dybbuk.

Inspired by PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP. Seriously, check it out. It's an amazing story.

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Comments ( 28 )

This animal seems like a nice friend. I would like to bring him to my home and feed him upside-down bones and water.

8102954 Would you give him an upside-down dog house?

I actually missed a few typos, despite finding many earlier. And one of them was even made by me!:pinkiegasp:

Fluttershy said as she noticed the less-than normal detail about the canine that stood in front of her.

That should be 'less-than-normal'.

ignoring the fact that the author had just defiled a paragraph in which the center of attention was word that would make any English teacher cry.

Center of attention was a word.

It sounded like every ounce of it being was nothing but malice and hatred.

Its being.

Hopefully to writer didn't either.

The.:facehoof:

And now on to some funny stuff.

Regardless, Fluttershy was a kind pony who wouldn't harm a fly!

She won't harm a fly...

She took a few steps back, no doubt stepping on a couple of ants (because screw ants),

But ants mean nothing to her.:trollestia:
Also, you missed the 'irregardless' here.:trollestia:

As Jumby-Doggo finished shaking off the heretical splinters,

BURN THE HERETICS!:trollestia:

Maybe someone with some self-respect.

Are you trying to say something?:unsuresweetie:


8102917 You are here too? I honestly never thought anyone I already knew would see my editing at work.

8103234 Did you just see this in the new stories list? Cause if so, that is a very small chance, and I am glad it happened.:pinkiehappy:

8103259 Yup. New stories list.

8103260
What are the chances...

8103263 Something out of something. Everything out of nothing. Soup of of shoelaces. Idunno.

8103271
Soup out of shoelaces? Are you high or something?:scootangel:

8103274 Nope. Just sleepy. I begin to lose my logical functions the later it becomes. :pinkiecrazy:

8103278
You should probably sleep. Get those functions back.

8103281 No sleep. Piano practice first. And then maybe read some more horse words.

8103287
You play piano, and didn't say that in your random facts about you?

I like horse words too.

You could put a horror tag

8103387
But there is no horror?

Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.......... I don't know what to say to this, actually. Um...... How did you flip the words upside? That's the only coherent thought I have. :derpyderp2:

8239852 I found a website that flipped the text upside-down​.

Also, I'm not shocked. This... really isn't the sort of story that I feel can be given a review. :derpytongue2:

My only thing is.... If it's head is upside down and it's slobbering like crazy, wouldn't that get in it's eyes and blind it? Like, everytime it was gonna eat.
Then it'd be all dead and stuff, right?

8434997 ... listen man, the Illuminati was behind this. They must have some sorta special serum for its slobber!

Nah, in all seriousness, I never thought about that. Interesting criticism though. However, the thing is technically a Dybuk, which is a Jewish demon. So, it already is dead... I guess.

I like to think that the laws of reality don't quite apply to demons.

8435019
Lol.
Omg.
The thought of dog drool just floating up to the ceiling in drips instead of to the floor is killing the scary doggo image.

"No, bad demon dog, stop drooling on my sky lights."

"Awe, what a cute puppy... Gah, he drooled in my face, mommy."

8435036 "NO! BAD DOGGO! Don't pee on the chandelier!"

"YOUR FELINE PET SUCKS FISH IN HEEEEEEEELL!"

"That's it, no treats for you for a week."

8435040
This should be written!!
Have at thee...

This was so stupid.

Which means it was like a mirror for my own stories.

Ugh. Take my upvote.

8525846 Glad you, uh, liked it. I guess. :derpytongue2:

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