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"For fear of exposer"
*For fear of exposure
Good work, even if it is a little bit predictable. Any good spy should know this trick. It's one of the oldest tricks in the book.
Nonetheless, the execution of the premise is good. Solid flow, and a nice, happy ending to wrap things up.
8072958 Thanks for the critique. A yeah, a "happy" ending
This was so intense.
8079499 Thanks. I'm glad you liked it