Human X Pony
Human in Equestria
Kenneth is your average everyday person, all up until he was tossed off a boat and into an insane asylum. Unable to speak nor learn their language, ken decides to stick by the only two ponies that he can communicate with. Just when things are starting to look up, and the ponies start to grow on him, reality throws one last curve ball his way.
*Comments contain spoilers, read at your own risk.*
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05/04/2017, 24/04/2017, 27/04/2017, 15/07/2017, 24/10/2017, 20/3/2018
Chapters (26)
Honestly, this story is really good, kudos to you!
Whats will the period be between updates? Looking forward to it.
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Thanks man, I'm already done half of the third chapter. It's all about when I finish them and how much polish I want. I plan to do at the very least a chapter a week, but I myself am hoping to to bring that time down. Probably more realistically a chapter every three days. As you can see I finished chapter two one day after chapter one.
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Thats great to hear! I have many questions regarding this story but that would just be spoilers if answered. So ill just ask 1 question: will this be a human turned pony, just human or human with magic story? Beacause the fading hand did not seem like his magic, but rather some sort of error from the teleportation between worlds.
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As of right now, I have no plans on making the human a pony.
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Grammar errors notwithstanding (they were fewer and fewer in each chapter), this has the makings of a great story if you manage to pull it off.
Which, in all honesty, seems like you will.
Are you improvising and writing the chapters as you go, or do you have a structure which you follow?
Either way, definitely looking forward to reading more!
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I like to write novels with a bit of both. I have a set plot (path) which I'm going to take with this story. While on the other hand, I also use improve for the actual creation of the chapters. So thing actually connect through out the story.
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featured WOooooooOOOo
Thank you all for not only reading my horse words,
but for liking them
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8075953 having a baseline (however loose) is a sign of even better things to come, as it means that there is a very low probability of you getting lost in your own story and then having to figure everything out later
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I really couldn't help myself with that one.
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Yeah, that's exactly what I was thinking when I made it. Plus what is your avatar? Looks like jell-o or something with a pony face slapped onto it lol.
The blanket with sleeves part killed me
8076041 ever heard of puddi? It' a few years old, I just decided to slap a dash face on it after a rare bout of inspiration (and/or idiocy)
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Never heard of it. A quick Google search later and know I see where it's from lol.
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Gotta have that snuggie in there.
Enjoyed the new chapter! Hopefully our mc can find a way of dealing with his random teleportation between worlds :)
Interesting, so a spontaneous teleport between dimensions, which takes a while, but in Equestria it's only a few seconds.
There's one thing that's been bugging me here though - when Celestia speaks to her guard, he is able to understand her, but Ken is able to understand her as well... how come? Or is it just written there so we know what she said?
Also, when Ken calls her sun butt, the nurse suddenly understood before Celestia repeated what he said.
And later the nurse didn't understand a word Ken said.
Just a little inconsistency I thought I'd point out.
Also also, this chapter has considerably improved grammar compared to the previous ones. Still;
"their called"
"their poor"
Replace their with they're
Also, how Luna handled that backfired prank... either she's not conductive at all, or handled the phone before, knew what to expect, and prepared herself for it.
Either way, that was great
I wonder if the animosity will ever cease between those two.
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Good catch with the inconsistencies, I'll see if I can fix them up after I finish writing the next chapter. Every little bit helps polishing this story.
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We can only wait and see
I enjoy naive pony fics
Hmm.. *keeps reading*
Not bad.
I loves it! Still wondering what is going to be the truth behind the flickering and teleporting.
Woohoo, another chapter! :D
At this point i am beginning to suspect the phone as being the cause of the teleportations. Time will tell!
The Pinnacle of human tech includes the snuggie... I lost my shit
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The Snuggie is obviously the pinnacle of our technology.
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A couple more twists and turns and I'll probably reveal what is happening.
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You are right, only time will tell if you're right or wrong.
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Thanks for the support
8084074 No problem dude. Keep up the good work
Interesting fic so far, follow it i shall.
Well, at least Celestia's suspicions were put to rest.
... or better said, she knows that Ken is not doing any of that intentionally. There's a link, but he's not doing anything willingly. Heh, learning control will be fun, especially since he has literally no experience with magic before.
Anyway, now that's settled, they can all start focusing on the important stuff. All the while dealing with world jumping shenanigans. That's going to be fun. I don't think that Luna's animosity will help, at least not from the start.
Also, Celestia's reaction to the vacuum cleaner
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Thanks for the support!
Sorry for not posting any chapters recently, had some stuff that I really needed to get done. I shall continue the writing tomorrow, hopefully get a chapter out the following day.
Gotta love how Celestia praticly threw herself at the chance to have a adventure.
I like this story so far.
8103684 Also threw herself at the human in bed
giggity
Maaaan, this chapter was worth the wait, keep them coming!
Probably needs more editing work done - there are quite a few small but not insignificant errors that could have been easily avoided. Innocents instead of innocence, "to of been" instead of "to have been", et cetera.
But, that notwithstanding, it's good to see that at least some animosity from Luna is gone. And that moment when Kenneth asked Celestia why she didn't want to go, and his subsequent realization... that was nice. A brief moment of vulnerability of Celestia, almost having her chance to break from the tedium of her everyday life taken away from her... Yeah, it was sweet.
I really wonder if and how long will it take Ken to learn the language.
Also, cuddles! Never say no to that. Cuddles make you happy, unless bad touch is involved. If it is, you have to make even badder touches. Or start running around in hexagons, squealing like a pig. Tends to work as well. Because if you can't convince them then confuse them instead!
woohoo, the romance begins! I'm a sucker for sweet mushiness ^-^
*sighs* I guess I will move it from tracked to favorites. Well done on this cute chapter. Looking forward to more.
And thus the first signs of attraction between the man and the mare appeared.
RIP our new protagonist. Twilight's on a Teaching Spree.
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Thanks for the support you guys
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Well it did poke its head in 'adventure bound I', but you're right it was more predominant in this chapter.
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I am too, otherwise I wouldn't be writing this novel now would I.
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I agree that my chapters do need some work. With the time I release them its the best I can do. I might go back and edit them all when I'm done with the book, we'll see.
As for Luna, there will be a lot more going on with her in later chapters. That is all I can really say on the matter right now.
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Celestia does what Celestia wants.
XD "I feel bad for you" That got me laughing.
Woohoo, the romance deepens! I am a complete sucker for romance, and an even bigger sucker for Celestia romance, so you got me hopelessly hooked :P
Haha, I was definitively thinking of Twilight when he was talking about the most terrifying creature XD ya got me good!
And that chapter ending was hilarious! Celestia is about to go full revenge on our poor human :P
More more more!!!
This line never gets old.
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Glad to see you're liking the story.
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and here is some more
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In all honesty, I was going to have it be originally twilight. It's even written in my plan and everything, but once I was actually writing it I decided to change it last minute.
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I'm also a big sucker for romance, I tend to love seeing how relationships grow and how they are tested. However, I do not like pure romance, I find that you have to put in a little something else to keep it entertaining. So, I always like to add in some comedy in there as well.
Its really nice to see all you guys enjoying my writing, it's very humbling to say the least. Not only that, but I, myself, have already seen my work get featured 3 times on the front page. Which is just... wow. I will strive to keep this up, and bring loads more horse words for your enjoyment.
Yay! It's going well. Keep it up! The adventures and cute moments are great!
Great story so far, so keep up the good work
Great plot twist, really liked the explanation as to what caused his teleportations.
Aww I can't wait for more. :-)
Vanilla, of course, never goes wrong with the classic.
Chocowate. Fat people love chocowate. (incase people get offended by that just know im fat to. So i can say that) in all seriousness i like butter pecan or vanilla.
Bacon and maple sunde
Cookies and Cream