HOLY BALLS! ITS ALIVE!

It's still doing well! Still well written, if not a little fast paced. I do wonder though, unless I understood wrong, was that large portion of the middle supposed to be italicized?

Either way, it's still a fantastic read! Loving it! Keep up the good work!

FUUUUUUCK YEEEESSSSSSS

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Thanks, I missed that mistake. It's fixed now.

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Ah! Excellent! As I said, it's still a fantastic story; I'm awaiting the next fantastical installment!

Hot damn dude, it's about time. A year and 3 months, what happened? Writers block? I've been waiting for ages for an update and honestly, you couldn't even begin to comprehend the joy and relief I felt when I saw that you updated this. I hope we don't get another hiatus like this. If you have to do this again, I request that you at least leave a warning so you don't scare us into thinking you left, never to return.

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More like writer's Great Wall of China.

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Writer's Block hit me hard on everything, actually. My urge to focus on writing for just one fic at a time held me back really bad.

I think I'll just say "Fuck it" and write for whatever story I feel the urge to write for going forwards, instead of limiting myself to a linear order that can hold up everything if one chapter is held up.

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Alright smartguy, what Legion Noire am I referencing?

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shhhh.

I'd call Alcatraz' personality in this pretty damn accurate to the novel "Crysis Legion". You got that part right; but here's a quick fact: Alcatraz cannot take any part of the Nanosuit off. Unlike the 1.0, the 2.0 is fused to his body; the only reason Prophet was able to get it off was that he had a special undersuit that prevented "Symbiosis"

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I know the N2 is what kept him alive in Manhattan in more ways than one, and that it's part of him. I just figured he'd be able to remove his helmet, and nothing else.

I ended up where now?