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TJAW


America enjoyer, NATO enthusiast, military history and geopolitics appreciator.

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I'm intrigued
I've played Crysis and watched a few vids of Crysis 2 and must say I'm curious how this will go.

By the way

FIRST!

a crysis story their only 2 on this site so thank you keep up with it :pinkiehappy:

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Oh, you're welcome! :twilightsmile: The utter lack of them was part of my inspiration for writing the fic, as well as me mishearing some dialogue in Crysis 2, although I can't exactly remember what I thought I heard. :shrug:

keep up with it the first ch was really good i want more but i have to wait :fluttershysad:

oh crysis3:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
coming out have you seen the traler

Also, Alcatraz is going to be partially based on Gordon Freeman as he is portrayed in the "Freeman's Mind" machinima. That means that he's an intelligent, partying (Alcatraz is stated to have a fondness for tequila), nerdy, badass, somewhat paranoid and egotistical individual. :rainbowdetermined2: Expect him to get into trouble, be a bit of a douche, (try to) pull off one-liners and probably make a fool of himself.

On a Crysis 2 related note, I'm doing my first SuperSoldier playthrough, I'm on "Semper Fi or Die", and I've only died once so far in the entire campaign.
>Inb4 I jinx myself.

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Yes, both of them! :twilightsheepish: I think that UK-ish dude was Psycho from Crysis 1 and Warhead; they never explained what happened to him, and I think he may have achieved a level of symbiosis with his Nanosuit similar to what Alcatraz has achieved. Also, I'm wondering what the multiplayer models will look like. I'd like to see some woodland camo Marine N2s and the same woodland SCAR as in Crysis 2! :pinkiehappy:

do you have a ps3

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Sorry, I'm a 360 gamer. :twilightsheepish: That said, I believe in equality between all platforms; not as a "love and tolerate" thing, but because I sincerely believe each platform has its own advantages and disadvantages.

awwww and true im ps3 fan but i had an xbox but it got red rings 2 times so i got a ps3 and gave it to my brother now i want it for halo4:fluttershysad:but i diegress my onlie is free:yay

now all i need is a good godzilla story

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:applejackunsure: Don't look at me! I honestly think Equestria would just get fucked up horribly by either Godzilla and/or other warring monsters. Besides, my Gojira knowledge is pathetic compared to what it used to be. :ajsleepy:

It's awesome story, definitely tracked... but it takes alot more than getting knocked though merely one measly wooden wall to KO Alky, he received WAY harder hits than that thoughout Crysis 2. Even while not in armour mode the suit would absorb the brunt of the impact, and even if he DID get KO'd, the nanites (Which can repair your ears to perfect condition seconds after you go deaf.) would have him up and running again in no time, and S.E.C.O.N.D would take control of him during the brief period he was out.

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Don't blame the walls, I know Alky's a tough sonuvabitch; blame Twilight's powerful magic. I keep emailing Hasbro, saying "twalot iz op plz nerf", but they never respond! :pinkiesad2:

Okay, just an FYI: This fic is gonna have less frequent updates than my other one, so expect a decent interval between each chapter, compared to my Halo fic.

I'm kinda dissapointed in how this chapter turned out...:pinkiesad2:

"togrther" :pinkiegasp:
I found an error. Please fix it. It's near the place where he's asking: “So, who’s here, and what’ve you got?”

Edit: I do like the story though.

878831 What's your gamertag? Mines NelsonLaugher47. Maybe we can talk about stuff.

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"TJbrena". I'm not on much right now since my parents have the Olympics on most of the time, but I'll accept your request when I get it.:pinkiesmile: Also, once school starts I'll only be gaming during the weekend and breaks, but that's not for a few more weeks.

This is funny! it's so funny, I can laugh my head off by reading this! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
Keep up the good work!
BTW!
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did anyone else see the left for dead 2 reference?

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I don't remember putting one in there, actually.:applejackunsure:

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Oh, right. Because I made AJ start a story and then get cut off, a la Ellis. Forgot I put that reference in.

...I never knew we had a Manehattan in America.

1097833 Alright, cool. I AM MASTER OBNOXIOUS READER! :rainbowlaugh:

"Princess Cadenza mi Amore.”

I believe its Mi Amore Cadenza

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Fixed. Sorry Doctor Freeman.

1099853 The Freeman shall spare you.... However, the Freeman finds the arsenal in this book is missing something important....

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Crowbar? X-43 MIKE? M2014 Gauss? K-Volt? Is it even a Crysis weapon?

1099892 Crowbar. It has solved all of the worlds mysteries for me. And many of Xens mysteries. And by mysteries, I mean how many times do I have to hit something for it do die. But in the end, isnt that all that matters?

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Well I don't even count the number of times I hit something, I just enjoy doing it! I think it's the fun of inflicting pain on aliens that matters.:pinkiesmile:

1099914 You have learned well. Now go forth, and smite evil!!! - points crowbar towards the rising sun -

I think you should make Alcatraz talk when he has to. It's makes him more intimidating.

Alcatraz! You turned from a Call of Duty character to a Action movie character.

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Eeyup. :eeyup: I think it's better to have that kind of character than a generic emotionless special forces guy.

(PS I haven't seen this show in years)

I found this error. Forgive me. :fluttershysad:
Where’s Rarity live?” Alcatraz asked.

Where does.

Spectacular, Spectacular, Alcatraz!

All in all this was a good chapter.

I like where this is going.
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You might have already known, but the B-company squad are US Army.

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Of course I knew, silly-filly! :pinkiehappy:

I fucking love you for putting Bad Company in here man!

It amused me when Alcatraz was trying too hard with the references, since thats how my friends and I talk all the time.

50 gigs? Thats, like, fifteen days of porn. (Full days.)

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