• Member Since 12th Jun, 2012
  • offline last seen Nov 28th, 2017

electreXcessive


I am an average everyday brony. I like to let my creative juices flow and create things. I'm always striving to improve, so I hope you enjoy my stories.

Comments ( 19 )

Sounds good. I didn't spot any grammar mistakes. It will be added.

Hmph. Not too shabby. I'll check up on this every once and a while.

Goddamit, it's over already? UNNACCEPTABLE!:flutterrage::flutterrage:LONGER CHAPTERS ARE REQUIRED!

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Thank all of you for your support! :twilightsmile: This is my first attempt at a fan-fic, so I had no idea how it would come out. :rainbowlaugh: Is there anything that you think that I can improve upon from here? I would like to make my story as enjoyable as possible and become a better writer.

1138000 Well, I would recommend chapters of at least 1.5k words.

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Thank you for your advice :) I knew that this chapter was going to be cutting it a little short probably. I guarantee that the next chapter will be much, much longer though! :pinkiehappy:

First: It's a good start. Second: How did this pass submission? I thought you need to a least have ponies before it get accepted. Third: MOAR! :flutterrage: please :fluttershysad:

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I'll try to get up the next chapter by this weekend at least. :)

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Take your time. There's no rush. Release it when you feel it's ready. :pinkiesmile:

"I'm going to hell, aren't I?"

I fucking ROFLED!!! :rainbowlaugh:

Did...did he seriously go into the radioactive chamber, where he was guaranteed to die from exposure, WHILE FAWKES THE RADIATION-IMMUNE SUPERMUTANT WAS STANDING RIGHT THERE? And they LET HIM? Talk about horrible friends. :facehoof:

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Didn't get the Broken Steel DLC.

Hey, I haven't actually read this yet, but it sounds promising, so is there any chance those chapter could be uploaded at some point?

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There is definitely a chance that I may finish this story sometime in the near future.

Dead?
Dead.

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Sorry man. I cancelled this story more than six months ago :/ Even if I were to continue it now, I wouldn't know the first place to start, and most of the others have probably forgotten it anyway :/

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thats shame another story got canclled

I haz a sad. I know why you said that younwere cancellimg the story, but this looked likenit could have lined up for a very fine piece of work....

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